Slyphy's Compliments
Project Reviews
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High School is for Dysfunctional Teenage Relationships.
Can't wait to read more :) -
Blue Eyes
Can't wait for chapter one! -
Carpe Diem
I love the words Carpe Diem. It's my school modo--also I've been taking Latin fo ... -
Janice No More
Can't wait to read more, the prologue was amazing :)
Submission Reviews
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ZEP
Lol, this is great! Where can I buy one of these? ;) Congrats on winning! -
<>FOURTEEN<>
Awesome chapter Alex! Looking forward to reading more. -
<>TWENTY FIVE<>
This was great! -
I Will ONLY Read If.....
Awesome points here Travis! :) -
Prompts
Awesome, I'm glad to hear it's working out for you! It's kinda like doing s w ... -
Get the Job Done!
I had this tip in my article but it's good to see it again because so many peopl ... -
1: Mask of The Fake
There are a few errors but not many. Limit the number of times you say ‘Estelle’ ... -
Characters
Excellent article Alexandria! These are some very helpful tips that are often ... -
I'll Never Let You Go
Love the rhyming! -
My Heart Keeps Beating For You
"my heart will keep beating for you..." Pure gold! -
Don't ...go...
Whoever said you were awesome at poetry was not lying. -
Breathe
Cool, its already out! Will look at it soon. -
Epilogue
Poor Alice! I absolutely am in love with the dialogue towards the end. I had ... -
Chapter 26
So glad to be reading more of this again! I'm kind of sad that it's coming to ... -
Chapter 1: Memories
I read the summary of your book and just HAD to read it. It's as great as I thou ... -
Untouched
Wow I love this story! I would point out the grammatical errors and sentences th ... -
Ch. 1 Lunch Time is for Confessions
Loving this story already! Bliss Henderson is an awesome name. It fits her char ... -
Bunny #66 (Co-author) Taken.
This plot is really clever. ;) -
prompt #29 entry (my second one)
Wow, I love all the details in this peice! You're really good with weaving them ... -
Chapter Two - Lucinda
Excellent job with this chapter! I'm really curious as to what will happen next. ... -
Chapter 21
Whoa, this gets more dramatic every time I read it. Excellent job Travis! No g ... -
Dedication Page
Oh, does your daughter play an instument as well? I play the piano, saxophone ... -
In The Dark
Nice job, keep it up! -
Chapter 20
Nicely done! I like how engaging the rising action is in this book. Saw a couple ... -
Chapter 4: Half Past Twelve and Home By April
Aww, that was cute. I love the names Virgil and Anya by the way. -
Please, don't hurt me.
Much better. Other things I noticed: I [dreamnt] about chocolate; all abo ... -
Please, don't hurt me.
So much action! Way to get into the plot imeddiately. I like it a lot. Maybe ins ... -
Chapter One of ...And Going Through Life
I liked how you immediately started the conflict. I think some more descriptions ... -
Wallflower
Note: First chapters are allowed to exceed the word limit, just not excerpts. ... -
Chapter Two- I Didn't Expect That
My vote: yes twins bb Loved it!! -
║ Visions ║
I really like this story so far. Mostly your characterization! Thanks for the ... -
Chapter 14
Whoa. Just when I think Bridgette couldn't get anymore surprising, another shock ... -
Chapter 12
Ohmygod! Bridgette's gone crazy. No mistakes floating around this time--amazing ... -
prompt #5 exercise.
I loved it! Good job focusing on characterization. I could hear the character ... -
The Discovery
Simply Brilliant! What a strong voice! I love where this is going so far. ... -
Chapter 10
Your characterization with Leah gets better with each and every chapter you writ ... -
Chapter 1- Fireworks and Homophobes
I love how you used 3rd person for this. Most of the time people slip back to ... -
Intro- basic history
I'm liking this allready. :) -
Chapter 9
I know this chapter isn't finished yet but I love the cliffhanger. Can't wait ... -
Blood
I love the dark and morbid tone of this. A job well done! -
Prologue
Awesome prologue. Can't wait to read more! I'm curious as to how your going to ... -
Prologue: Burning
The hook for this chapter was pure genius. In all honesty you had me from the ve ... -
Chapter One
Wow--this is just as good as everyone says it is. I'm soo glad they reccomended ... -
Chapter Two
I'm really getting into this story! The action and the dialogue compliment ea ... -
1
looks pretty interesting :) -
Chapter 1
I love how you used present tense. Writers use it to give a sense of immediacy i ... -
The Lights Look Lovely Tonight
haha...wasn't ecpecting the ending. :) -
The Mind
Very true. -
She must die.
Amazing work here, I loved it! :) -
Pearls of Wisdom
Very gothic (the literary kind of gothic), I love it. :) -
Prompt #2 Heartbeat
I love this, it was writen with such a nice voice. I haven't seen poetry on prom ... -
Prompt #4 Entry (Beautiful Malice)
I love this! You should make this into a real story. The protagonist would be ev ... -
Prologue *Revised*
This is an awesome start. Definetly captured my attention. I think this will sou ... -
Titties and Beer
O my gosh this is soo funny. Hahahah ^~^ -
Danny, the Arsonist?
You made an amazing short story from this prompt. The line after the prompt was ... -
1. One
I really enjoyed reading this. I think in my spare time I'll get to read the who ... -
Pandemonium
Awesome! I love this. Nice form and lovely tone of voice. :) -
The Broken System
Beautfully done :D -
Prompt #7
Awesome pormpt :D -
Wordly Ghetto
Just read through this again & I thought it was pretty darn good. There is a nic ... -
(Waterfall)
Nice visualization! The ending of this was completely unexpected, and I loved i ... -
One World
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IF DAN CAN'T CLIMB A TREE, WHO CAN?
nice story rlly liked it :) -
When Dad Came Home
Nice story -
Her book
I thought this was really good. Definetely very thought-provoking Great Job! ... -
Chain of Ease
Great writting! Couldn't find any multi syllable words-- which is good :) -
The man and the fox
Nice story -
The Night I Met Sam
Awesome work! I really like this one :) -
Silver Linings
Nice one :) -
Drunk/Sober
Hahaha -
Life's Rules
Awesome writting :) -
The Earthquake
This is great :D -
The Signs of a Beast
I liked this alot :) -
Jinkazama
Haha. I had to admit that the first sentence made me go 'huh?' It's a good thing ... -
Cooper's Breaking Point
Amazing story, a real tear-jerker too! This must have been a really life-changin ... -
Babes to the Grave
This is amazing! I felt like I was watching a movie about teens lives that've be ... -
My Love!
This is awesome, i like it ;) -
Weeping Willow (changed pic)
Awesome poetry! I liked how you repeated the first stanza, and the imagery was ... -
Grammar Is Cultural
Cool concept -
3. Prologue
I greatly enjoyed reading this prologue! It was not over-detailed and had just e ... -
my dream boyfriend
I totally agree~! -
2. Chapter 2
I loved how you started this chapter off. The arguing sisters really set a scene ... -
1. Chapter 1
Sounds great! The idea from the story was interesting, but actually reading it g ...



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