Slyphy's Compliments

Submission Reviews

• No. 4 The Outsiders
  
  Interesting. Why does this sound so much like me and my friends at our school li ...
• Slyphy
  
  Sorry about the malfunction. My Ipod is spazzing out right now. :)
• Prompt 33?
  
  Great prompt Lindsey!
• Prompts
  
  Awesome, I'm glad to hear it's working out for you!  It's kinda like doing s w ...
• Your Story is Awesome
  
  This is awesome advice. I think it's also important to know that not all the cri ...
• A Han For Jonathan (Working title)
  
  Ivy has a blog?? :)
• Prompt #28 Entry - (The Island)
  
  This is the most creative response I've ever read to this prompt! Doesn't it rem ...
• Choke On IT *ON YOUTUBE*
  
  I HATE bullies. I passionately despise them so much.... -_- Don't let them get ...
• Prompt # 29 Entry
  
  This is great! The only thing is that sometimes I couldn't tell who was talking. ...
• You Wanna Play
  
  I have to agree, resisting can get really tough. lol I like this a lot.
• Nothing
  
  Right, lol :)
• Chapter 27
  
  Awww! that was sweet. I loved how I can read dialogue now and know each indivisu ...
• Chapter One - Selene
  
  The idea for this is so original! And I love stories about twin sisters, especia ...
• Chapter Two - Lucinda
  
  Excellent job with this chapter! I'm really curious as to what will happen next. ...
• Bunny  #50 (Adopted)
  
  Haha, I procrastinate too sometimes.  I think everyone does at some point. :)
• Biggest Heartache
  
  Aewsome quote!
• Bunny #47 (Adopted)
  
  Thanks, I'll record it in the Bunny Records.
• Chapter 18
  
  I love this happy chapter!   At first I thought Maria was that person she yell ...
• Chapter 9
  
  Whoa, haha, didn't expect that. :) I thought Bridgett just said that to be mean ...
• Chapter 4
  
  My little brother who was 5 at the time used to make us stop all the time so we ...
• Prompt #23?
  
  I've never thought about writing a biography b 4. ;)  Yesterday I was at a boo ...
• Prompt #22 Entry - (Blackout)
  
  Amazing, I really liked your entry! I espciallly loved how you ended it. Your c ...
• Delicious Iced Tea
  
  You could say so much in so little words. I saw a whole movie flash through my e ...
• Katie Sat Rocking
  
  I love how the whole thing happened within the character's thoughts.
• Chapter 9
  
  Love this chapter, so many things happened. I'm really curious about Jenny. Hmmm ...
• Sad Sacrifice: The Faith.
  
  Ohmygosh, thats my favourite movie too!
• Second heart
  
  This is cute, I only wonder why they spelt two wrong
• Dreamer
  
  yup, competely agree with that quote :)
• Scratch
  
  haha, I love this quote :)
• Jack the Ripper
  
  Loved it! I just remembered this story from before--when I first read it there w ...
• Caroline
  
  Thanks for the bands, I'm going to listen to them soon. It's great that you told ...
• Chapter 30
  
  Whoa! That was...whoa...
• Chapter 25
  
  Aaron has bad timing.
• Chapter 22
  
  I'd choose modeling over Brooke--she's just not worth it.
• The place where they cried.
  
  Sorry about the typo, I meant "Trail of tears" :)
• Life
  
  Hey, that helen keller quote is on my calender for March :)  coincidence huh? l ...
• An extract taken from Corporal Aaron Quinn's diary on the 5th of November, 2062, the day he died.
  
  This is really good. You made the story so real, it could almost be a reality. I ...
• Resolutions
  
  isn't it suppose to be two 'days' into the new year?
• Ocean Ties
  
  Awesome quote, JFK was on the news today for some reason, I think it had sumthin ...
• Tennyson
  
  Very poetic, Tennyson had some skills :D
• Taylor
  
  Forbidden love is my favorite kind :) This is great
• Prompt # 4 Entry
  
  I love fantasy novel-read them all the time--so I know that this is seriously go ...
• Getting Started
  
  I do this all the time. But I think one thing important should be added to this ...
• A wish
  
  How'd it all fit, lol. Was it in small print? :D
• Lost and Gained
  
  Interesting, never thought of that.   So that mans that every christmas I actu ...
• Right
  
  reworded into two words----Procrastinating is bad
• Fly With the Wind
  
  Very vivid scene, I liked it alot. :)
• Jared Martin
  
  sad story...
• Gold Bond and the Monkey Poo (unfinished)
  
  Ouch, that sounds uncomfortable.
• Beef Stroganoff
  
  Very sweet :)
• THE TANOANS: Introductions
  
  Oh, and one more question. Are you allowed to use their real names or did you ha ...
• THE TANOANS: Introductions
  
  Just out of curiosity what ages do the campers range from or are they all the sa ...
• Untitled
  
  Karaline sounds alot like my moms name :)
• Prologue
  
  I like the way you set the scene right off so the readers aren't wondering where ...
• My Perfect Man
  
  cool :)
• The destiny of love
  
  This sounds exactly like full moon o sagashite. The story ends just like that. M ...
• The destiny of love
  
  This sounds exactly like full moon o sagashite. The story ends just like that. M ...
• Love and Water
  
  It's seems you've successfully combined the topic of love and nature in this poe ...
• I Only Eat For You (So Watch Me Starve)
  
  It's so interesting how your poetry is so much like a story. I love reading it. ...