Sprayoncrayon's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 11/21/2017

Unique (69)

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  • the Sphere of Time
    There is a lot of action, and a lot to narrate, but I never really get a sense o ...
  • Belle
    Also, in Canada, the air hurts your face.  We have freezing fog.  Black ice.  Te ...
  • Royally F— (2)
    So it's a cle --- .  You have an inter ---.  You did a thing.  I liked it.  That ...
Enlightening (231)

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  • Foster
    A continuation from last month, although somewhat more coherent, to reflect the ...
  • The Plot Thickens?
    To be honest, I was waiting for some sort of Cloud Atlas-like chiastic structure ...
  • System Lost
    Because I am only familiar with the beginning of the saga and not the whole myth ...
Helpful (303)

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  • Belle
    You could say, "There are many causes of PTSD, but I'm sure the military appreci ...
  • Steel Heaven - An exerpt
    It's interesting, that's for sure. Not really sure where you're going with this, ...
  • Mental Klinikiphobia
    It's easier now, to see what Foster is identifying as the fantasies, and what ap ...
Brilliant (324)

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In-depth (50)

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  • Bad Smells
    The story is rather matter-of-fact, and didn't really capture what it is to be A ...
  • Taphophobia
    You story is now pared down to the point where too much is happening within the ...
  • Mental Klinikiphobia
    What do you mean by, "The night didn’t allow recognizing what kind of stare that ...
Motivating (165)

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  • Where Monsters Dwell
    Aside from the overuse of the word "hobo", this is a strong story; however, the ...
  • The Last Halloween
    A phobia may not have been named, but it is every parent's concern - rational or ...
  • Prologue
    Historical fiction isn't really my genre, but in reading this, I was looking for ...