Sprayoncrayon's Compliments

Compliments:  1163

Last Compliment: 2/23/2018

Brilliant (333)

Submission Reviews

  • A Dish Best Served...
    All I can think of to add more action would be to shorten the prelude in order t ...
  • The Battle of Cape Ecnomus
    Good story, but you have a couple of instances where you introduce dialogue and ...
  • The Thirst
    Correct me if I'm wrong, but with blood being salinated, I am wondering if it wo ...
Motivating (167)

Submission Reviews

  • Heist
    Interesting story, and after reading the ending, more of the story context becom ...
  • The Inspiration of Kevin Clean
    Alright, so I finally got around to reading a few of this month's submissions. ...
  • Where Monsters Dwell
    Aside from the overuse of the word "hobo", this is a strong story; however, the ...
Helpful (307)

Submission Reviews

  • Stillness is the Enemy
    I see you've cleared up that confusing phrase at the end.  Cameron's second sent ...
  • Stillness is the Enemy
    Good writing for an action scene.  The tense action, cramped quarters, desperate ...
  • The Thirst
    Welcome back. Also noticed the ore/oar disconnect.  There is loads of tension, a ...
Enlightening (236)

Submission Reviews

In-depth (51)

Submission Reviews

  • Last Interview
    I'm going to echo what others have said, in that Phil's lack of understanding is ...
  • Bad Smells
    The story is rather matter-of-fact, and didn't really capture what it is to be A ...
  • Taphophobia
    You story is now pared down to the point where too much is happening within the ...
Unique (69)

Submission Reviews

  • the Sphere of Time
    There is a lot of action, and a lot to narrate, but I never really get a sense o ...
  • Belle
    Also, in Canada, the air hurts your face.  We have freezing fog.  Black ice.  Te ...
  • Royally F— (2)
    So it's a cle --- .  You have an inter ---.  You did a thing.  I liked it.  That ...