Sprayoncrayon's Compliments

Compliments:  1086

Last Compliment: 9/26/2017

Helpful (296)

Submission Reviews

  • The Spoon Prince
    One of the things we writers do on this site, regardless of the contest, is to h ...
  • Firelight and Passion
    If they're asking for a "scene" only, then my submission is also outside of the ...
  • Crystal
    I've read enough of your work, Tony, to know where this was going before it got ...
Enlightening (211)

Submission Reviews

  • Last Date
    What I'm lacking is the tipping point at which Evelyn decided that Addison was n ...
  • A Poem for the hell of it
    Meter doesn't matter.  That was a hoot, and pretty much what I was expecting fro ...
  • Hmm...
    I feel like using the same metaphor several times is belaboring the point.  Ther ...
Brilliant (311)

Submission Reviews

  • Patupaiarehe
    This has a lyric quality to it that makes the story seem more surreal than it re ...
  • A Slice of Life
    Much clearer now, with the difference in time marked.  If you wanted to come bac ...
  • Angels Regret
    You know, you can come to Calgary.  We're getting pandas.  Had to move the eleph ...
In-depth (45)

Submission Reviews

  • Table for 3.14159
    All this world-building that you worked so hard to make believable turned out to ...
  • The  Mouse Princess
    Cute story, but with a couple of niggles.  One - anyone who has to clean, and wa ...
  • Clammy Shades
    The poetry itself is descriptive and visual, but I was somewhat thrown by the am ...
Motivating (161)

Submission Reviews

  • An Evening Affair
    Nicely done.  I'm glad you didn't bother trying to disguise what was going on, a ...
  • Posh Nosh
    Brilliant writing; the back-and-forth is quite clever and really captured the pe ...
  • Jawing With Jesus
    A little ham-handed on the morality tale.  I would have liked to see it more of ...
Unique (62)

Submission Reviews

  • Trial by Hak’enra.
    This doesn't feel like it fits the challenge, mostly because it was excerpted fr ...
  • KPriam@Dimension2.com
    I think it would have been more convincing if Kassandra had offered a more plaus ...
  • The Jimmys
    Big J, little J, what begins with J?  James Junior jamming jellies.  J J J