Sprayoncrayon's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 10/10/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Autophobia
    I don't actually listen to the songs, so perhaps I'm missing a bit of the experi ...
  • Trial by Hak’enra.
    This doesn't feel like it fits the challenge, mostly because it was excerpted fr ...
  • KPriam@Dimension2.com
    I think it would have been more convincing if Kassandra had offered a more plaus ...
  • The Jimmys
    Big J, little J, what begins with J?  James Junior jamming jellies.  J J J
  • Waiting
    I think to understand waiting as the mother of change, one must consider it not ...
  • Covered Cries
    I'm with Eric on this, in that you could turn this into a story.  There is a lot ...
  • Playing House
    Gonna sit with this one for awhile before I comment.  Need to think about it.
  • A Damn Mess
    Wait, why is Adam Caucasian?  Shouldn't he be Semitic?
  • The Treaty of Ghent
    The opening is difficult to tell who is speaking, but once I was oriented on who ...
  • Locked Doors
    You do an excellent job of capturing the isolation and desperation, but I can't ...
  • Movie Star
    Shades of Luka Magnotta.  I'm going to agree with Chris here, largely because im ...
  • Disclosure
    I'll be honest, I was looking for a supernatural ending - you know, Melody has u ...
  • Number 6706428
    Nice.  Short, humorous, and a good take on that opening line.  Cheers,     Dunca ...
  • A Yarn of Confessions - Revised Aug 30
    There's two of them now.  Two members harassing me for icons for their feedback. ...
  • Case Closed!
    Don't worry, it's still here.  You overwrote Pony Tales with Case Closed and ren ...
  • confession song #2 - I Liked Us Better Then
    Oh, come now, Tony, it's not about lines.  I mean, geez, you've seen my writing. ...
  • confession song #2 - I Liked Us Better Then
    I like it better when I read the other song.
  • Divorce Confession
    What is up with you and car violence, Chris?  Is the driving really that bad in ...
  • Can't Love You Anymore
    Seems very simplistic and somewhat repetitive, right up to the point where you s ...
  • A Cautionary Tale
    It's about bloody time they recognize your talent, right?  Congratulations.  Way ...
  • A Yarn of Confessions - Revised Aug 20
    So, are you going to hand out icons for feedback, or are you hoarding them all f ...
  • Case Closed!
    Just goes to show that you shouldn't get drunk and chatty until the statute of l ...
  • A Cautionary Tale
    Is this Webook recycling month or summat?  Second challenge entry that's a repea ...
  • Parts of my Necromancer Project
    This writing out of sequence thing sounds like a lark.  Just put a bunch of rand ...
  • The Color of Light
    Good idea posting the last updated information at the top.  I'm going to copy th ...
  • Alohomora
    Sorry, can't see the selfie as I'm using Firefox.  ...er, terrible jokes aside, ...
  • Listen
    Rhythm aside, the poem speaks without feeling forced. The message is clear, and ...
  • Through the Window
    So I see this either as being an asylum (as Alec clearly did), or perhaps the bo ...
  • Recess Lessons
    You have created Andrew Wiggin as the villain, and I can give no higher praise t ...
  • Man's Best Friend
    This guy's had two homes burned down?  Someone build that guy a house made of no ...
  • Man's Best Friend
    This has the feel of something that has made its way through Google Translate mo ...
  • The Colour of Happiness
    Ode to cutting, I think.  Especially with that refrain.  I think you have examin ...
  • King of Pain
    It can't be that painful to get seven months of therapy without paying a dime. ...
  • Drifting
    You got rid of the window hazy.  And here I went out and got a table dusty to ma ...
  • The Name Of This Book Is A Superstition - Chapter 8
    Anthony, in the past I have noticed that you don't employ the feedback I have gi ...
  • Step by Step
    Sometimes you read the author into the work, and Dave does have a tendency towar ...
  • The Hook
    I have to say that what makes this so brilliant is the interposing of the curren ...
  • Refreshing the Tree
    What exactly is a pot marked wall?  One that has been hammered at by pots leavin ...
  • Genesis
    That was an interesting read.  The original story from God's perspective really ...
  • Stripped Vanity
    There is a bit of a disconnect here, and I think it would have been better to pl ...
  • Love, Lust, and Padded Bras
    Nicely written, somewhat of a counterpoint to my submission.  The soft romance, ...
  • A Steady Hand
    Guilt, despair, escape.  Sad to think that she doesn't have anyone or anything t ...
  • The Painter Boy
    I agree with RJ.  Adjectives and adverbs are among the modifiers that we use to ...
  • Once-Was
    I was afraid after reading the first sentence that you had put the cart before t ...
  • Kudos Thomas
    Dollys, how can you not like the Bay City Rollers?  Their music has inspired the ...
  • And then I became Job
    This is an interesting story that could use a little variety in the word selecti ...
  • Out
    To be honest, I took the opposite view from Kimberley - I read the opening statm ...
  • Flames
    I have to wonder if they're really doing her any favors by keeping her in the ho ...
  • Between the first breath and the last
    Wow.  I mean, wow.  There is a poetic element to this that I think comes out in ...
  • How we became Gods
    Up until the point where the narrator mentions the doll, it had a very masculine ...
  • Songs from the Minaret
    The mystic language and cadence of the writing gives this a distinct flavor that ...
  • Pandora's Damnation
    "It reads, 'Here may be found the last words of Joseph of Arimathea: He who is v ...
  • Hallow Be The Eve
    Strange fiction.  Good characterization, although you'd think that if Thomas had ...
  • Trick or Treat
    To anyone commenting that this stretches the theme, I say humbug!  If anything, ...
  • My Apologies...Edgar Poe
    Gothic horror is dead.  Dead, I tell you!  Any attempt to revive it is a Fankens ...
  • Baltimore Catechism
    I remember getting sent to the principal's office for correcting the religious s ...
  • The Best Days
    (Sits in a corner and pouts, wishing he could write this well)
  • Prelude
    From the opening, we get this sense that the protagonist is more familiar with M ...
  • Serenity
    What a dngerous mistress, alcohol.  He's right Carrie will know every time.  Wel ...
  • First Kiss ®
    You brought Oma back in and the sentiment attached to her.  That's great, becaus ...
  • Casaterra
    Is this a deliberate attempt to distance yourself from last month's submission, ...
  • Forever Mine
    How is it that you don't have full stars?  Here, have the other half |<
  • Skittle to Seattle
    I liked the earlier version of the crash - as the rest of the narrative is told ...