Totems as Guardian Spirits, an Introduction
I found your explanation of the world and all this is in it fascinating. I find ...
4. Another Hell
Very cool to have humans begging for help in the walls. Its an image right out o ...
2. Pit of Death
OK, let me start with what I liked. The bone fence was great. It really added to ...
1. Born in blood
Alright, I know your feedback said not to put any 'good story!' types lines but ...