This is pretty good. you seem to really throw yourself into the charcter.
Hey that was really Interesting. You have to check your grammer a little bit, bu
Unless you mean the talking, which I based after NINJA NINJA in AFRO SAMURAI.
I have to agree with Draculine, If I had more time i'd read all of it but sadly
Wow thats a good storyline, but the typos kinda take me outta the story. Keep it
The Playroom and Devin
Wow it's sad to know that people really do that stuff to kids and you have no pr