The_Dragon's Compliments

Compliments:  272

Last Compliment: 8/4/2016

Enlightening (65)

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  • 1
    One remark on this first chapter: you use the passive voice a lot. Tone down on ...
Helpful (46)

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  • Chapter 1
    The start is good. A bit dark (with the storm and all) but a delicious descripti ...
  • Chapter 1: Lights Out
    General: From who's POV is this told? At first you start with Thomas, but you so ...
  • Chapter Three
    General: I must say: a great chapter. It is clear and it opens up a myriad of po ...
In-depth (43)

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  • Chapter 1 : Observation
    Good start. I'm curious.  She tried to think of a restaurant with good food. A r ...
  • Chapter 3: Bewildered
    General: I would introduce that Hinnant is the Sheriff the first time you mentio ...
  • Chapter Two
    General: The start of the chapter is a bit difficult. Shiloh - the Curken form o ...
Brilliant (40)

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  • Chapter 2: Missing Child
    The start is very good... And then you toss it all out with the next paragraph. ...
  • 1. Prologue
    I would delete the entire first part of your story and start with:  The wind rus ...
Motivating (53)

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  • Living in the Past
    I must admit I'm not that much into poetry. But I love what you did here, so you ...

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Unique (25)

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