Unlivingmoon's Compliments

Compliments:  34

Last Compliment: 4/26/2011

Helpful (7)

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  • The Frontier
    Very nice storytelling from the prospector's point of view. The only thing a bit ...
  • A Change of Hands
    Great scene!- I would love to read more.  My only question is about your use o ...
  • The Passengers
    I really liked the idea of the alchemists standing together to fend off their pu ...
In-depth (2)

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  • My Wicked Heart
    This was a good scene but I feel as if I was just given the middle of a story an ...
  • 37. Eyes
    I am a bit creeped out, but I really want to know what they were both seeing.... ...
Motivating (7)

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  • The Machines Stop
    This scene feels like an exciting beginning to an even bigger story. I would hap ...
  • The Modern Pygmalion
    I actually like the name 'Mammary' if you are going to do a humorous spin on the ...
  • 17. Blood
    I agree with Rita- I would love to see the storyline behind this. I would like t ...
Enlightening (9)

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  • The Glimpse into Tomorrow
    It didn't seem to me that this was a scene- just a nice descriptive backstory. Y ...
  • In Death Do You Part?
    Stunning job! Rarely have I felt experienced both dejection and serenity by the ...
  • Sounds
    Brave character- I don't believe that I would have tried to investigate a creepy ...
Brilliant (7)

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  • Sex Prostibot's
    If there isn't already robot porn, you're sure to start a trend. Is it wrong how ...
  • Alive or Dead?
    Nice twist :) I would not have thought to make the unmoving figure a scarecrow.
  • No Where...Depression
    For some reason, as soon as I read this piece, I could picture it being turned i ...
Unique (2)

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