VMorton's Compliments

Compliments:  14

Last Compliment: 3/12/2014

Motivating (14)

Submission Reviews

  • N/A
    Brilliant. This was a completely entertaining, self-contained story, with no ski ...
  • The Challenge
    The setting and atmosphere were flawlessly drawn, and the choice of language was ...
  • Stranded
    You did it.Twenty-eight sentences and a complete story. The solitary tone remain ...
  • An Officer's Unfortunate Birth
    I like the social commentary, which is crystal clear, but not obnoxious or preac ...
  • Sam's Letter to Jim
    A dreamy feel you held consistently throughout the piece. I didn't understand al ...
  • N/A
    The spareness of the prose made the emotion that much more effective. You didn't ...
  • Eternally Yours
    You are the mistress of emotion. I felt her pain, and then her sense of wonder a ...
  • First Kiss
    The descriptions were vivid, the pacing and structure for such a short piece was ...
  • The Mexican Standoff
    Liked the balance of action and humor, especially the pencil.
  • The Games People Play
    Excellent work, and good mind game!
  • Home away from home
    I left comments on nuts and bolts of your writing on previous 2 chapters, so rea ...
  • A Neat Idea
    This reminded me of Ray Bradbury's writing.  Liked it!
  • Descent into Darkness  The First Chapter
    General - The choice of opening is very good - a woman on a mission in an exotic ...
  • Removed
    Tight writing.  Lots of detail in a short space.  Intriguing suspense at the end ...