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Compliments:  20

Last Compliment: 9/15/2017

Enlightening (20)

Submission Reviews

  • Hmm...
    ‘His mouth was ‘humid’’… Humid felt a little off here, and using the word ‘child ...
  • Alice and Freda (1890s/Nonfiction)
    Whoa! Holy crap! That took a rout I wasn’t expecting.  One small nitpick; since ...
  • Anticipation
    Nice! A sweet tail of seduction. I’ll admit that the part about him having alrea ...
  • Seder
    Nice! This was well written, easy to follow, and definitely a creative take on t ...
  • Cosmium
    Oh wow. Deep story! That was a really good read, and an easy one to get drawn in ...
  • What's a World Without War?
    Beautiful intro; it was uncomfortable, but brilliant being right there in that c ...
  • Timex
    Haha, great story! That was very entertaining!  I do have a few small nitpicks t ...
  • Sex Appeal
    No problem :)  Oh don't worry about it; it isn't worth changing and I kind of re ...
  • Fed up!
    Watch for typos. Interesting style, but the typos removed me from the story a li ...
  • Holiday Justice
    Sorry, too much eggs?
  • Holiday Justice
    I don’t know what half that last comment was about Chris, but it was interesting ...
  • Gift
    I love that ending, my friend!  ‘the faucets just have hot and cold running oran ...
  • Chapter 2
    Nice! So he’s been out a while. I love the concept where he still doesn’t even k ...
  • Prime
    Nice! This was very well thought out.  In the sentence that ends with ‘what coul ...
  • Among Gods
    Nice! I love the concept! Identical gods of different names from two different m ...
  • The Divide
    Huh, I didn't find this an easy read, and still not sure I got all of it in one ...
  • Take Twenty Seven
    'Oh damn' was my impression at the end. A very easy read. I loved the little ban ...
  • A Spiders' Life
    Nice! I don't know much about poetry, but thought I'd check this out since you r ...
  • The Last Couple
    Nice! Orcas are my favorite animals; I loved your depiction of Shark Bane. This ...
  • Pebble (Try Number Two)
    Haha, this was genuinely an entertaining read! Original and well done. There are ...