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Compliments:  15

Last Compliment: 5/21/2017

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  • Unfortunate bunch
    Haha, nice; I liked the gaming twist at the end of it. It looks like you’ve gone ...
  • Into the Forest
    Nice! A fantasy story, and an excellently exciting one!  My only little nitpick ...
  • Playing House
    Nice, I liked this.  I can be a bit picky about the specifics of mental disorder ...
  • Green Eyes Fading
    Very intriguing! The intro had a lot of mystery to it.  ‘Decent’ wine.  If he li ...
  • Bay Leaves and Bombs
    Wow, this was a sad, but a great story. ‘Of hunger itself feasting on her inside ...
  • Chapter 5 : Oblivious
    ‘There once was Lia, but that was long ago.’ —add the comma. Again after ‘pain’ ...
  • 16.  Forest of Darkness 2
    “Three men shot me with crossbows, you idiot.” –Love this (reads better with the ...
  • 15.  The Forest of Darkness
    I see that you indeed give more info about this Anthon fellow. I love the part w ...
  • 10.  Judges and Princes 1
    “Luther’s” in ‘Luthers training in logic’ You forgot the apostrophe. Again with ...
  • The Painter
    Haha, your secret is safe, man. Also, I noticed that you switched the single quo ...
  • Alone and free
    Hey Nikolai, read your bio and see that English might not be your first language ...
  • What's A King Who Has No Peasants?
    Nice! A very interesting read. I'm not sure how I feel about your metaphoric use ...
  • Finit en Avance
    Ah pas mall, man. J'aime beaucoup ton histoire. Le titre lui fait certainement h ...
  • The Party
    Those were all really great and diverse characters. I really like this! At first ...
  • Chapter 2. CHICAGO : RESET
    -You have more run on sentences and sentence fragments in this chapter. I also n ...