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  • Crystal
    Ha! Nice, I wasn’t expecting Gaius to die, and what followed was pretty funny. ...
  • The Evacuee
    Nice! This was a really good read.  My only little nitpic is maybe to include Ed ...
  • Origami
    Nice, a great read!  The imagery and tone of the story worked very well. You pai ...
  • Zippo
    Nice, nice! A good read. I hope all three make it out.  Like Alec, I had a hard ...
  • Sex Appeal
    Haha, nice! A great and entertaining read! That was a very funny and somewhat sa ...
  • The Unwaged .(Revised)
    It’s a sweet story, but the punctuation errors and typos ruined the experience f ...
  • A Day of All Days to Cherish
    ‘On my twentieth birthday, a legal aged boyfriend gave me a Mickey of gin.’, Was ...
  • Postscript
    Why write ‘Ivor grunted something about a waste of money’ and ‘”Better be worth ...
  • Good Evening
    The writing was great, but I felt like the overall story may have been a little ...
  • Chapter 88
    A cliffhanger? Damn, I really wanted to see Wennal once more and Aeratu getting ...
  • Chapter 87
    The Ancient One, huh? Alright, it looks like there’s a new bully on the block. I ...
  • Chapter 86
    More great action here. Mera’s realization that The Blood is changing Matu was g ...
  • Chapter 85
    More awesome Anaxis action! This chapter probably demonstrated his ability to co ...
  • Chapter 84
    I think Anaxis might be my favorite character in this, if I haven’t said that al ...
  • Chapter 83
    Matu is still undergoing changes. This makes me wonder how much stronger he can ...
  • Chapter 82
    It was nice to see a Mera perspective. I never got a real sense of her feelings ...
  • Chapter 82
    As much as I'm enjoying all the action, this change of pace and focus on one cha ...
  • Chapter 79
    Good kiss scene Between Mera and Matu. It’s about time it happened as well haha
  • Chapter 81
    Where did Poseidon go? I’d kind of like to see how he could influence the battle ...
  • Chapter 80
    Poseidon! I started to think we wouldn’t get to see him! That’s got to be the co ...
  • Chapter 76
    I absolutely loved that titan fight between Grenal and Wennal
  • Chapter 76
    I take it Wennal was downplaying his abilities, or maybe lacked just a bit of co ...
  • Chapter 75
    Good bit of mystery in this scene here. I feel like it’s taking them longer to g ...
  • Chapter 72
    ‘then ‘worried’ {shook} {jerked} back and forth until the wolf’s head simply cam ...
  • Chapter 71
    Very epic!
  • Chapter 70
    Winter Wolf, like that title
  • Chapter 70
    *I
  • Chapter 69
    Okay, yes, Matu has gotten much, much more powerful!
  • Chapter 69
    The last chapter now makes more sense to me
  • Chapter 68
    Ouch! I’m glad you aren’t scared to kill off characters. Poulxeria will be misse ...
  • Chapter 67
    These Wennal perspectives are great! Nice reference to the Minotaur at the end t ...
  • Chapter 66
    Man, you are setting the tone very well for one epic battle.
  • Chapter 65
    I’m really enjoying this Alecto persona that’s sticking to Matu
  • Chapter 64
    Anaxis is awesome
  • Chapter 62
    You mention Hercules here, but earlier in the story, you used his proper Greek n ...
  • Chapter 61
    ‘Zinos ducked his head in agreement with Anaxis’ scorn’, I think you meant Zanis ...
  • Chaper 43
    *sail, it's
  • Chapter 31
    I’m liking the Teucer perspective! I’m also really enjoying his love for the oce ...
  • Chapter 26
    That feeling of dread he gets sometimes gives a lot of mystery. I get the impres ...
  • Chapter 23
    That bull fight story was pretty damn epic. Well done!
  • Chapter 19
    That last line was very strong!
  • Chapter 18
    ‘I thought you were going to brain {train} me.’-this made me laugh.  So Matthias ...
  • Chapter 17
    ‘Teucer turned with a dour {sour} look on his face’ Nice! I finally got my actio ...
  • Chapter 15
    So Matthias is turning out to be great in all things combat related, it seems. N ...
  • Chapter 14
    Matthias is being called a prince now? I was as surprised as he was. I like how ...
  • Chapter 13
    Nice, nice, Chiron, and more Achilles references. I’m liking where this is going ...
  • Chapter 12
    Nice, I like how you are portraying the gods in this, and their relation to immo ...
  • Chapter 11
    Nice! I think this is my favorite chapter yet. This was very epic.
  • Chapter 9
    Haha, offering a feast consisting of mostly meat. It fits Ajax’s character well.
  • Chapter 60
    So, if this is Wennal looking into Anaxis’ mind, how is this chapter from Zanis’ ...
  • Chapter 59
    Hours away from the climb, gees. You make it look like they may not make it
  • Chapter 58
    They won't be happy when they find out Alecto is dead lol
  • Chapter 57
    ‘And the to last {last to} give up on anything’ A Wennal perspective, nice! His ...
  • Chapter 56
    I’m looking forward to seeing how Matu’s character development will go with Alec ...
  • Chapter 55
    Cronos or Kronos, not ‘Chronos’, if you meant the titan. Aeratu as Cronos!? I li ...
  • Chapter 54
    Vexiaus is Mera?! Holy shit!  Also, very epic ending that’s really making me wan ...
  • Chapter 53
    Should I know who is Arul? The name sounds like it might be familiar, but I’m no ...
  • Chapter 52
    Nice to be in Matu’s shoes again. I also noticed that he’s the only one who’s pe ...
  • Chapter 51
    I’m really enjoying this new take on Helen of Troy.
  • Chapter 50
    Nice to see Teucer will be at Matu’s side again.
  • Chapter 49
    Whoa, short, but of epic magnitude. I liked this scene
  • Chapter 48
    I love how great this war is turning out to be!
  • Chapter 47
    …smiled as if Odysseus some long-lost brother.”, don’t close the quotation, cons ...
  • Chapter 46
    I’m liking how Turios is advancing as a character; he no longer gives off the im ...
  • Chapter 45
    So there were a bit less than originally thought. I first envisioned around thir ...
  • Chapter 44
    Ah! Now I get it. Aeratu gave him these gifts after finding him and made him int ...
  • Chaper 43
    They finally arrive! Great job with the pacing btw. With all the events that hav ...
  • Chapter 42
    Great job linking the fire that Matthias made with this chapter!  I loved the li ...
  • Chapter 41
    Beautiful song by Lukios
  • Chapter 40
    *Line
  • Chapter 40
    *love that scene lol
  • Chapter 40
    So Grenal was the sea creature? Neat! This all ties together nicely, since you s ...
  • Chapter 39
    Anaxis is taking quite the gamble. It’s exciting though!
  • Chapter 38
    A well written sailor’s funeral. The emotions described here felt genuine.
  • Chapter 37
    A nice look at Anaxis’ backstory. I really liked Teucer’s a few chapters back as ...
  • Chapter 36
    A good death for a good character. In the end, I’m glad he found Teucer.
  • Chapter 35
    {“Come with me,” Ajax ordered.}, but Ajax wasn’t even in Athens during that scen ...
  • Chapter 32
    Sea monsters now?! That was a pretty damn awesome chapter!
  • Chapter 33
    A nice Aeratu perspective. You gave a good indicator of the trouble to come for ...
  • Chapter 34
    So the sea creature is looking for Matthias, nice. I figured as much when it was ...
  • Chapter 30
    Nice! Good character development in Matthias.
  • Chapter 25
    Nice, I’m looking forward to seeing what’s on this tablet.
  • Chapter 24
    Wennal as babaef/Chiron, nice  So the gods of Olympus are of the blood. You are ...
  • Chapter 22
    Come let us have breakfast.”, you forgot to close the quotation at the start.
  • Chapter 21
    Interesting thoughts about Vexiaus.  So Babaef is Chiron? What about Chiron bein ...
  • Chapter 20
    You have another paragraph at the start that seems to address the reader again. ...
  • Chapter 7
    I’m not sure what You meant at the start of this chapter. Where these Matthias’ ...
  • Chapter 6
    Yes! I love the Ajax reference and can't wait until Matthias meets him! I'll be ...
  • Chapter 5
    'when' it's offered. This could work as well, maybe better.
  • Chapter 5
    Accept hospitality ‘as’ it’s offered. I am finding a few typos. Not many though. ...
  • Chapter 4
    ‘And priest would come looking for you’. Do you mean priests? Nice! I sense a li ...
  • Chapter 3
    Love the part where he first holds the spear. Ow whoa, and the part where he fin ...
  • Last present.
    Interesting read. This was very dark and gruesome.  ‘I won’t stand on my knees i ...
  • Chapter 1
    Quite the intro! Love it!  Should Poimon and Kunaja really be embracing on the f ...
  • Chapter 1
    Never mind what I wrote about the fire. I’ve read this over and see that the fir ...
  • The Red Line
    Nice, great little story!  Maybe to less of a degree than my own entry, I feel l ...
  • Diana
    Whoa! Was not expecting that. To me, this went from ‘meh, well written, but not ...
  • Nothing
    Nice! This was great. 'The most brutal were the Canadians', you know it haha  Th ...
  • 18.  Predators in the Darkness
    No need to write in, “needs edit and readability check”. That’s what we’re here ...
  • 17.  Anthon remembers
    Love how burning for years ruined his mind, temporarily. His recovery where he d ...
  • 12. An Awakening
    An Aeratu perspective? Nice.  Love the reference of Leonidas and the 300 Spartan ...
  • 14.  A knight and a Hostel
    Nice! I love your description of Ridari Anthon Heiler. Since you’ve later confir ...
  • 13. Leaving the Abby 1
    Still loving the dialogue. This whole story also has great imagery and pacing so ...
  • 11. Judges and Princes 2
    ‘By comparison, Wennal was a gardener.’ –I love the whole paragraph that’s from ...
  • 9.  A matter of honor 2
    Have Gunter take the first shot. Especially since he’s being driven by the confi ...
  • 8.  A matter of honor 1
    You have a few run on sentences here. I hadn’t noticed any in your previous chap ...
  • 7,  Lawyers make bad monks 1
    Remove ‘become monk’ from the second line. It reads a little awkward. You make i ...
  • 6. Wennal the Judge 3
    “One ‘of’ their woolen tents.” Other than that, there are a few places that I fe ...
  • 5.  Wennal the Judge 2
    I'm especially liking these endings. Your last few lines always seem to be the s ...
  • 4. Wennal the Judge 1
    ‘Older ‘then’ mankind.’ You meant ‘than’. The first time I thought this was a ty ...
  • 3. The Chapel 3
    Very nice. I especially like that ending. Your dialogue is very tense and makes ...
  • 2. The Chapel 2
    Nice! I love the perspective switch. I’ve never seen that done in first person f ...
  • 1. The Chapel
    Martin Luther? Oh I like where this is going. Apart for being excited about this ...
  • Breathe Deep
    I loved this. Very well written. You had me hooked until the end and ended with ...
  • Anastasia
    Overall, good start. The story clearly isn’t finished, but still intriguing. I l ...