davevito's Compliments

Compliments:  10

Last Compliment: 2/15/2016

In-depth (2)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter Two
    okay so the plot of this was interesting. i like where you went with this. poor ...
  • Chapter One
    i enjoyed this chapter a lot. this story has a lot of potential. the only real p ...
Motivating (4)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 4
    You are just doing a fantastic job with this story. that's all i can really say. ...
  • Chapter 1
    I love the premise of this story. Ive always been fascinated with the idea of re ...
  • Episode 1: Scene 3
    I find this scene to be very interesting in that Cody is bold enough to be writi ...
Brilliant (4)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 3
    I am enjoying this story the more i read it. Its well thought out and thoroughly ...
  • Chapter 2
    I am enjoying this story so far, purgatory is interesting to say the least.   Th ...
  • Chapter One - REVISED (as per feedback)
    well the first thing I will say is that I cant read anymore until I start readin ...