davevito's Compliments

Compliments:  4

Last Compliment: 12/14/2015

Brilliant (4)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 3
    I am enjoying this story the more i read it. Its well thought out and thoroughly ...
  • Chapter 2
    I am enjoying this story so far, purgatory is interesting to say the least.   Th ...
  • Chapter One - REVISED (as per feedback)
    well the first thing I will say is that I cant read anymore until I start readin ...
  • Episode 1: Scene 2
    Over all this scene is well done, it shows the modern teen dealing with real wor ...