girlbird's Compliments

Compliments:  41

Last Compliment: 10/16/2015

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Submission Reviews

  • I don't think we're in Zork anymore
    I couldn't stop laughing! Loved both the characters, the stubbornness and the sa ...
  • The Visit
    Good story, very eerie. Poor Jenny. Hopefully Samantha comes around before next ...
  • DEAD CATS
    Wow. That was just.... I don't know what that was, but it was funny and I totall ...
  • Blue
    Great story! Some fantastic lines. My favorite was "Time is God's greatest con m ...
  • Great Expectations
    Creepy. I might be cynical, but I had expected the nuns to be complicit somehow. ...
  • In Case of Emergency
    Great story. Nice and dramatic!
  • Over the Trope
    This is great! Wish I'd thought of it. Making the narrator a character was hyste ...
  • A Life.
    Lovely poem! I couldn't figure out the rhyming scheme at all, but the words had ...
  • Confronting the Empath
    I cannot tell who is meant to be the villain here, so well done in creating that ...
  • Timothy took his time to school
    Interesting story. It didn't go the way I thought in the beginning, shifting to ...
  • Time is Silent
    Vivid little story tied together with beautiful descriptions. I loved it so much ...
  • Hex Nihilo
    Great story. I loved the way you easily constructed the rules of the world, culm ...
  • Kristday
    Great story! Changing the language like that is hard to do without making it tir ...
  • Once a Year
    Morbidly amusing tale. The final sentence was perfect.
  • TWO
    General: Great chapter! It really brought the story along, and the hints at the ...
  • For the Love of Christmas
    Beautiful story! The scene really came alive for me with the details used.
  • So This Is Christmas
    A charming story. Janice-the-fairy is a sweet character, and the description of ...
  • Step by Step
    Congratulations on placing! The ending was completely unexpected. I loved the wa ...
  • Drifting
    Congratulations on winning! I loved the way the memories meshed with the present ...
  • Act of Remembrance
    Congratulations on placing! A lovely story. The lines drawn from the song stood ...
  • Small Miracles
    I loved this story, its perspective and its poignant feel. A little cheesy perha ...
  • ONE
    (Fair warning, it's been a while since I've done any critiquing, so this might t ...
  • A Friend Like No Other
    Beautiful story. Loved it.
  • Fruits of Labour
    As a fairly steadfast pro-lifer, this piece made me uncomfortable, because to me ...
  • Joy
    Beautifully written. The descriptions were quite vivid and made it easy to visua ...
  • Mortified
    Yep. That's happened to me. Definitely felt sympathy for the character. A good t ...
  • Work From Home, They Said
    Loved it! There isn't much that could happen to make the situation worse. One sl ...
  • The Time I Pulled a Woman's Leg Off
    A funny story. Just needs a few paragraph breaks and a few edits for polishing.
  • Romancing the Throne
    Oh, boy. I'm with Ernest_Lee, the guy kind of deserves it for leaving a broken t ...
  • Secrets of the Samurai Squid
    Wow. That ending. This sounds like something my brother would write (which is a ...
  • The Challenge
    Loved it! The language felt appropriate to the time period and the five words fi ...
  • Jack
    Loved it! I've known animals like Jack, and I've helped wrangle them for medicin ...
  • A Falsie in a Cafe
    A nice story about prejudice. I liked how you made it a complete story in such a ...
  • As Luck Would Have It
    I love this story. It's a deceptively light piece, with enough humor that I had ...
  • Snow
    Congratulations, Aftab!
  • Lucky Man
    Loved the characters, the grump and the friends alike. Cynical internal monologu ...
  • Dog-like
    As an amateur player of MMORPGs, I have to admit that I've never once thought ab ...
  • Used up
    A wonderful story. It was close to feeling like a cliched story, but Casey's dis ...
  • The Three Musketeers
    A wonderful story that made me tear up, and made my nasty sick day that much bet ...
  • Mike's Dream (Revised)
    Interesting piece. It made me curious about Deep Ellum in general, so that's a g ...
  • And the Angel said... "Hiya!"
    Love this story! I enjoyed the parallels, but more than that I loved the ending, ...