girlbird's Compliments

Compliments:  14

Last Compliment: 6/2/2015

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Submission Reviews

  • A Chrismas cheer. a diamon in the Ruff!
    This story might be easier to read if there was more than one sentence per parag ...
  • While angels weep
    Magnificent. I loved the shaping of the poem. The whole thing was a little frigh ...
  • Hunting
    It's an interesting story. I find it hard to say what the creepiest part about i ...
  • Just One More Time
    Interesting story. There are too many stories of the suave vampire, so David's a ...
  • Family Times
    You set a charming scene. It sounds like a pleasant Christmas morning. There wer ...
  • Christmas Spirit
    Quite poignant. The Christmas spirit is definitely good for all of us.   Did you ...
  • Gimme Shelter
    Congratulations on placing! The imagery in this piece was powerful. It actually ...
  • Elementary
    I really liked the tone of this story. It was entirely obvious that it was a chi ...
  • Identity In Crisis
    That was great. Loved the ending with the other fake. I didn't see any problems ...
  • Balderdash
    A nice story, but could use some polishing and some clarity. Two words misspelle ...
  • Sunk
    Good job getting the challenge words in the story so early on. The basic element ...
  • Service
    There was some beautiful imagery in this piece. Unfortunately the challenge word ...
  • Burn, baby, burn (revised Jan 17)
    I'm no scientist, so I'll leave that alone. My favorite part of the whole piece ...
  • The Eternal Heart of Darkness
    I found myself confused by what was happening, as well as the tangent in the mid ...