I can't believe people would do that! Quite an effective poem. The fourth stanza ...
Chronic Distortion Perversion Compulsion
This was horrible to read, and left me distressed,which I think was probably the ...
NO! Well, you set it up nicely. Now the war is there, and the conversation at th ...
Beautiful. I didn't expect who owned the "hole in the wall." Starting with a tra ...
Nice cliffhanger to end the chapter on! You really moved the plot along here. I ...
General: It's an interesting premise. There are some odd word choices throughout ...
Half-life of the Heart
A lovely story, and I liked the historical setting. Like everyone else, I though ...
Libido Ergo Sum
A fantastic character study, and the final sentence was great.
A beautiful story, and that last sentence really made it. The descriptions reall ...