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Last Compliment: 9/11/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Time Craft: UFO
      Okay, read it. Firstly, let me say, it, in my humble opinion, seems very well ...
  • Crystal
    Eagles won, watched the game, they looked good!
  • Anticipation
      That's okay, Sue, it is not that important. Thanks for the review on my story, ...
  • Last Date
    I could say a bunch about this but one thing just sticks out for me. "Women! Can ...
  • Angels Regret
       Well, if the Panda does not feel like shit right now, the Panda needs a few b ...
  • A Slice of Life
      An interesting story, it really started for me at the diner. Somehow, the two ...
  • Sleep 2
      So, was this the 2500 word thingy cut down? Feel like you have half a novel he ...
  • Time's Justice
      Upon reading this, I realize 'Ah, Sue is back'.  The style, the well crafted d ...
  • What's a World Without War?
    Wow, that was good! I don't know about the find a place on the map part but that ...
  • Somerset Levels.
      That was a fast, well written, twelve hundred. They just fly by when properly ...
  • The Evacuee
    Very enjoyable read. Good story with plenty of ambiance and well written. It is ...
  • Tentacles
       Looked this over again, today. Think maybe I will go back and read your other ...
  • Into the Forest
      Wow, dear girl, I did read your story and was just going to read it again and ...
  • SIr Surpasser
    Very clever and a lot of fun. Two great jokes. Great narrator tone. Couple plac ...
  • The Man Who Wasn't Jake
    Hey Rik, keep thinking about the effort for a person to cut their own heart out ...
  • Dear Olive
      Read this again, keeping in mind the 'text' application and the recipient is y ...
  • Dear Olive
    How about named 'Alive' ? If it is a boy, well, how about TWeeT
  • Dear Olive
      Well, first off, I have to comment on the use of the single letters and numera ...
  • Outside the Box
      A tad hard to follow exactly who the guy in the painting is (self portrait) bu ...
  • Red
      Sue!   Sue!    Look what the authoress dragged in.    Pays to know people. ...
  • Red
      Did not pick up on it till Alec mentioned it but this sub too, takes place in ...
  • Red
    Okay, let me list 20 things I like about this story.  Ready...Go!    It is simp ...
  • BARTON
      Hey Keith, first of all, read your bio. You and Alec both have four boys. That ...
  • The Author of Your Destiny - finished
    :)    Just seeing you made an entry made me smile. Missed you. Like having an ol ...
  • Rewritten Fate
    It took a few paragraphs but I got sucked into this story. However, it came off ...
  • the Great Divorce
       Have to say, this comes off a lot less of a story and more of an exercise or ...
  • Trigger
      I'm with Duncan being with Chris on this one. Rob also is with Chris on this h ...
  • Covered Cries
      I believe, this was all covered in your previous outing, by an astute observat ...
  • Covered Cries
    Here's the pepper... When is the last time you read a story about a Canadian nat ...
  • The Raiders
    First para, I'm in it. 2nd, ditto. 3rd, rollin'.  Then you changed the feel, pa ...
  • Numbers
    For the Hole!
  • Waiting
      Hey Neil, I think what I was looking at is that a 'mother of' statement is a c ...
  • Intruder
      Awesome trailer, can't wait for the movie :)
  • Holiday Justice
       Just wanted to let you know I am enjoying the addition of your wit onto the W ...
  • Holiday Justice
      As man times as I have been here, now........   I always see the title of your ...
  • Holiday Justice
    WTF, Lou. You're as pale as the 'elusive white zebra'. You must not be the excit ...
  • Merchandise
      I've read this story a few times and each time my take ended up a little diffe ...
  • Holiday Justice
      Odin, I think Ken just called you an idiot. Don't take that lying down, mate! ...
  • Holiday Justice
    Okay, after reading your comment, I will now have to go back and read the whole ...
  • Holiday Justice
    ADD:  I got that something had happened to the cop's daughter. A prior victim, ...
  • Pirates in New York
      Hey Edrick, good to see you around again. I had to check your bio on the issue ...
  • A close shave
      Jolly Good girl. You've got the plum. Go out tomorrow night and celeb with big ...
  • Cthonic?
       Thank you for entertaining me, El Canadian. I felt the soft, downy snout, but ...
  • Decay
      I think Eric might be right, in that I too thought it was a pretty poignant st ...
  • Locked Doors
    I did not see this as metaphorical. Just think Augusta Georgia, 1838. The last l ...
  • MetaWriting
       Hey Richard, that is pretty much what I try to do with my critiques. Only thi ...
  • Hauntings
      Alexis, from New York. The Big Apple?   I can see you love to write. This stor ...
  • You Just Never Know What's in Another's Heart
      Hey Devi, impressive. Course, you are talking to an ex Special Forces, light a ...
  • You Just Never Know What's in Another's Heart
      DEvi, dEVI, devi, it's like Christmas. Getting to maul three of your subs in a ...
  • A close shave
       Very Mello, Dolly. Quite a long interlude (middle paragraphs) to make the rea ...
  • The Last American Gunslingers
      Hey Chris, read your comment and the story. When you have that kind of materia ...
  • Hunters
      Hey Erica, re-read after reading my criticism below as I wanted to have anothe ...
  • Viking
      I don't know what keys I hit accidentally that pop me back to the other menu, ...
  • Hunters
       Well, I am about to say some crazy things and some stupid things bracketed by ...
  • My Family
      James, I think I can climb inside a character's head pretty well but, you set ...
  • Count to Five
      BTW, Sommer, you need to review my sub now. It is a bit of a mish-mash right n ...
  • The Hollow Men
      Richard, I enjoyed this again, even more this time. I would possibly cut out t ...
  • Burden of Command
      Hey Devi, read you comment just below. Now that I understand what you were try ...
  • Nevermind
      If the new Star Wars was like this, no one would of bitched. Thanks for a grea ...
  • What's A King Who Has No Peasants?
      Hey Chris, from a concept point, this was very engaging. Love the two edged sw ...
  • Abandoned children
        Hey Sara, welcome to Webook. The story is pretty heartfelt. You, I guess, wo ...
  • The Hollow Men
       Unless your suspicions concern the misuse of one individual by another, they ...
  • Burden of Command
      Hey Devi, I think more it is a case of you, trying to make some valid points. ...
  • Count to Five
      Liked your writing. Couple places could maybe use a fix.   This one seemed awk ...
  • REVISED EXCERPT - IMPERFECT HUMAN HEART
       Hey Devi, styles / tones / voices, are like tools. A hammer can pound a nail. ...
  • The Price of Freedom
    Happy Weekend, Sue
  • REVISED EXCERPT - IMPERFECT HUMAN HEART
      Well, you have given me a lot to think about.   It is one thing to write in th ...
  • Granada
      No, she doesn't. I had no observations, sir. Honest, sir, wasn't me... another ...
  • The Price of Freedom
       More than beautifully written. Close to perfection.    Did not understand the ...
  • All That Glitters
    please note the Twilight Zone mini contest we are running in the general comment ...
  • Day Seven
      Dude, I wrote this awesome comment and now it is not here?  WTF.   Okay, recap ...
  • Who can really say?
    I thought I had mentioned this yesterday, but I realize I didn't submit it. I no ...
  • Who can really say?
    It has been a while but what I remember about your writing the most is how well ...
  • Cara's Tale
      Wow, Neil, that was a tremendous amount of stuff. Did you have that in the que ...
  • She
      How that ended up on your story, I will never know Sue. That was a general thr ...
  • That Sound a Ruler Makes When You Bend it Over The Side of a Table and Let Go
      Hey James, fairy tale without the happy ending? How sad :( Will have to admit, ...
  • Four Years and a Day
       Good story NJ. Was immersed from start to finish. Didn't notice the word coun ...
  • This is My Land
      Hey James, that is a lot to absorb. It also draws some pictures that a foreign ...
  • The Peephole
    Your stars, madam, burning brightly.
  • Gluten Free Gnocchi
      Boy, did I miss you!   And the gauntlet please...   Coming back like a firecra ...
  • Chance Encounter (Revised)
      Awesome discussion. You wrote characters and in a tense that gave you leverage ...
  • Head in Serpentine
    Nobody misses the criteria more than me, Neil. Nobody. I can miss it five times ...
  • Laptop.
      Hey James, I am going to guess that virtually everyone who reads this will hav ...
  • Head in Serpentine
      Let's start with the compliment: The discussion is built on your astute commen ...
  • Carol by Candlelight
    Like that you kept the 'high on crank' pace up, the whole way. Lots of detail as ...
  • Paint the Tiger Purple
      Hey Ronnie, improved and very even in tone throughout. It may actually make a ...
  • Duo
      That read really fast. The MC seems very self assured throughout and it ends i ...
  • Franks Giving
      I have to say, I think Alec may have a good point. The story really starts wit ...
  • They Buried Him in a Box?
      Have to say, this was really well written and thought out. It was a bit hard t ...
  • A rice story
    Welcome to Webook MKirby. This story would be better in the next months challeng ...
  • For the Man Who Has Everything
    Interesting view of what a genie may or may not be. For you he could be God Leve ...
  • Bloke Bird
       Is it me or are you and Dexter (James) like-minded. Not in this months subs n ...
  • Hotel d'Amore
    Ronnie.... Ronnie... Ronnie................... Hey! Good story, but I had to rea ...
  • Wardrobe Shaped Boxes
    Sorry, I really do like it. You write great stuff, no denying. You can tell my m ...
  • I don't think we're in Zork anymore
    Congrats on the win Duncan. Not much contention from the time your sub hit the p ...
  • Home
    Wow!   Why is it real life packs such a fucking punch! I don't know what hurts m ...
  • x
    Hey Mariaski, what's up? Are you okay? Haven't heard, why don't you drop in over ...
  • I don't think we're in Dork anymore
    I don't know if the stars are relevant but I gave you 5. Why would I not?    Obv ...
  • Bloke Bird
    The stars sir, all of them!
  • The Visit
    I love this... but also, a bit hard to set up in just five words >at these times ...
  • Hannah
    Even after your explanation, I still don't get it. My brain just can't handle it ...
  • Blue
    Classic vignette. Smooth (polished actually) You can almost play a different son ...
  • Such Pain
    LOL  I know, in many parts of the world recycling is optional. Here in Californi ...
  • Such Pain
      What time of day do you recommend for reading this sub?   There should be litt ...
  • The Herald
    Very nice story, and a little off the beaten path, which I enjoyed. Your writing ...
  • x
    Mariaski.    As no one seems to be able to comment, I will at least leave some f ...
  • x
    I keep this piece, I wrote a few years ago, on my desktop. It reminds me:    I h ...
  • x
    Out on a limb here... I have an observation. Others may confirm or negate.    B ...
  • Full Circle
    Am I crazy, or is the Michigan mind at work? It's very subtle, small word here ...
  • The Silver Arrow
    You know I put a little effort into making that poem for you. A very friendly te ...
  • x
      55 is fine for touching all the stars. And bending down to pat the ground and ...
  • Creepy Crawlies
    Is your MC's name 'Honey'? And she is a baseball player too?  Catch more flies w ...
  • Palindrome
    Boy, was I behind. Your sentence is a palindrome :) For you then Neil, sir, I'm ...
  • Beyond the Prism
    Bout time that heart thawed. Summer yet up there? Very nice, Duncan.
  • Hannah
    Hey Dolly, this is really well written and was a joy to read. Love the surprise ...
  • Chilli Cheese Dogs
    Read this last night and did not comment. Wait for it... it reminds me of a 6 li ...
  • I Lived
    Hey Sam, the first few paragraphs really grabbed me. After that though, I starte ...
  • Can't Love You Anymore
       Side note: I will go to great lengths to avoid any contact with anything Nich ...
  • Marmaduke
    Hey Dolly, first, missed you. Sorry, had to get that out of the way. As usual, y ...
  • Collateral Damage
    I can only say I was relieved as well. :) Relieved that what started as somewhat ...
  • The Turning Point:  Chapter Eleven  (section one)
    Hi Penny, ran through a few chapters (parts).  I was uncertain as to the purpose ...
  • Confession of a Teenaged Grog-Slinger
    Very nice story. It seems to fit your style nicely. It also explains your style ...
  • The Truth
      "William King?  William King?"   "Yes, that's me. Over here sir!"   "Yes, plea ...
  • Another One Bites the Dust
    Guessing Game!! Well, I was going with cat until the 'insurance' thingy, which m ...
  • Never Look Back
    Congrats Kelsey, that's what I'm talkin' 'bout. Great piece, later, Chris
  • Keeping Up With the Joneses
      You and Duncan are practicing slight of hand, holding hands. This has an excel ...
  • Patuxet
    The stars sir, attached. A 5 star - blue level, defcon 4, superior ranking.   Ad ...
  • Fucking Charlie
    Hey Tony, couple things.    'Put it on a popsickle' sounds a little light for th ...
  • Revenge 2 (The Outstanding Balance)
    Sorry, I am not sure I would actually read the above. Left a comment for you on ...
  • Consequences
    Yeah, what he said :)  Right, this sub is exactly what the challenge called for. ...
  • Straight Out of Hell
    Nobody laughs more at our lame jokes. Your comments are infectious tomes wrought ...
  • Revenge
    I just found out if you smoke a joint first, the action sequences last a long ti ...
  • Inner Demons
    I won't gush, others will be doing that. I laughed to the point of disturbing ot ...
  • The Cold Can Burn Like Fire
    Hard to rake the little girl who's already thrown in the 'caveat caution'. Wait ...
  • I Imagine My World
    So, everyone knows this was kick ass. You are my heroine!  (hero, but your a gir ...
  • Bomaru's Quest, Part IV
    Thing about great writing is I seem to always take it personal . I react to it, ...
  • Chapter Sixty-Five
    Seriously, that was a lot of fun. This was a first for me. I have never read a l ...
  • In Case of Emergency
    Oh, and yes, we all have shotguns, but not under our bed. Too far away. The tric ...
  • White Knight
    Now that is a great story. Great first line, great last line and in between a pl ...
  • Bomaru's Quest, Part IV
    Here are your stars, sir.
  • Bomaru's Quest, Part IV
    Really thought as Michael became more and more of the story that a third layer / ...
  • Solstice Sacrifices
    Hi Leelah, the comments from Duncan are really good advice. What you wrote is a ...
  • Fate Intertwined
    Some of the phrasing in your comment. Oops, yeah, probably should of kept my mou ...
  • I Imagine My World
    I see the connection now. For me their was too much distance between 'I feel so ...
  • The War of the Leagues
    So does this also parallel some of the book dialogue? Now, I seem to think it do ...
  • Window
    Yes, well, there are a few THE 1s. Throughout history, ONEs have populated most ...
  • Window
    I check your comment total every five hours. If it has not increased I experienc ...
  • Window
    The last line is so Alec. I'm just wondering if it needs Alec. Like Duncan and S ...
  • my special ed class teacher
    Bing, I had two reactions simultaneously, laughter and sorrow. So many things in ...
  • An Evening View
    Well.
  • Mermaid Wishes
    I really liked this version a lot. Kind of a surprise ending I didn't expect mad ...
  • The Ghost's Lament
    That's a lot of prose to say 'can't go through the window, I'll just go through ...
  • The View from the Admiral's Table
    'Amiably', I believe. The perfect dinner poem. Not sure about the 'told me to le ...
  • A Life.
    Yes well, and then some of us are very, very good at this. No less than a master ...
  • man in the window
    I guess you know which spaghetti sauce goes with which pasta and how to write a ...
  • To Have and to Hold
    Am in the middle of your 500 words a day. Thing is, I didn't know this challenge ...
  • No, Really . . .
    Well Devi, I can't say I didn't see this cumming. I am a little confused about w ...
  • The Potter's Field
    I get mixed vibes on this and I do not know why. It is possible that I am not pr ...
  • Attempting to Rob Taco Bell
    First of all, this is my kinda story. If you can write great dialog making the s ...
  • Sara  -
    Feel like it reads as a documentary. I hear 60 minutes wants to pick this up as: ...
  • Timothy took his time to school
    On re-reading, I can't get past the "More space and less time?" Isn't that what ...
  • Cronic Dystopia
    Very funny and creative however, almost more of a joke than story because of the ...
  • I will always regret
    Hey Devi, your writing here is definitely concise and polished. Extremely heartf ...
  • Tales Aboard the Chronicle
    Great story, even better execution. Was this like... a lot of work or do you wri ...
  • CASA
    Wow, this sub is epic. I can not imagine how much work this was. At least it wou ...
  • Time is Silent
      I wrote a totally awesome critique for you that took me twenty five minutes. W ...
  • Cannabis Blues
    Sorry I did not get to this earlier in the month. For many, many, MANY people th ...
  • Hungry
    You made me wait 757 words to get to the punchline. Only thought, supplanting th ...
  • To Light, Ignite... And Bring To Life
    Hey Sue, this is real life isn't it. Reality. Sometimes I stare at my Iphone and ...
  • Nail Polish
    first one of the subs read. Wonder if the pic is depressing for all? Love readin ...
  • Choice
    Well deserved Dexter. Later, Chris
  • Choice
    Oh yeah, she can smoke now that she isn't pregnant. Wonder if David Letterman ev ...
  • The lion's roar
    Perfect! Bold and presumptuous while humble and demure. A clever mix of reality ...
  • Blackbriar
    Totally Aced Cesidio. Love the last line. Not because it is true, because it is ...
  • Pride & Envy
    Excellent overview Duncan. Especially the "Would this character be likely to ove ...
  • A Dreamer's Summit
    I read this and passed away happily. The writing was extremely smooth. Your choi ...
  • It's About Remembering What Came Before You...
    The best part of this is that the fifth grade chess club is an all girls club. I ...
  • Cobras and Pit Bulls
    For the complete dissertation on 'Snowballs and Ice Cubes' please reference "Fem ...
  • Escape from Stalag-Luft XV
    She was a Manchester United fan. She was a Liverpool docks whore. The splinters ...
  • Escape from Stalag-Luft XV
    Ah, great Lionel, that is bold, very, very bold. Also, interesting point on an a ...
  • A Friend Like No Other
    Great job on the win Sue, and nice house. Is that English cottage style? Great a ...
  • Cobras and Pit Bulls
    I enjoy it when there are interesting facts / info presented in a short story. I ...
  • Escape from Stalag-Luft XV
    Very enjoyable read. What I like the most is the tone does not waiver. I know it ...
  • Marcus Speaks
    As a matter of fact, right now I am at the B&Q in Hull, shopping for a tower fan ...
  • Marcus Speaks
    I kill time like nobodies business on Google Earth. I love sightseeing England. ...
  • Suburbia's Vice
       All seems pretty tight on the ship now. Reads well throughout and (big plus f ...
  • Genesis
    Okay, gave it some more thought. This is what is getting to me. I believe you ar ...
  • Genesis
    Gonna go out on a limb as usual. I would edit to tighten this up. Why? Because y ...
  • Under the rainbow
    Nod to Dollys for raising the curtain for me. Now the title makes sense. I guess ...
  • The Tango
    Sorry for the virtually incoherent comment below. Is the first paragraph like a ...
  • Drifter (Revised)
    Also, "an insurance salesman" is why I will read everyone's comments from now on ...
  • Drifter (Revised)
    This is why secrets are so hard to keep. First, let me congratulate you on a sup ...
  • Going Bush
    Given the possibility that this will not even be read, I am going to go out on a ...
  • Convergence
    Not being a Dr. Who fan, I will have to comment from a limited vantage point. As ...
  • Lily's Dream
    I like it! Well thought out I think. Just enough diversion with the 'why are we ...
  • Jeff's final cook out
    OK, this was the perfect 'Human' BBQ. Took it farther, made it work. I loved it. ...
  • The View from Spooner Hill
    Okay, this was really refreshing. Love the texting device of course but the stor ...
  • Fresh Meat
    of all the 'you're the meat' stories, this one is told the best. Does the host / ...
  • Keeping Up Appearances
    Ah...you are a people person too! Had to return the rate and am well rewarded. I ...
  • Midnight BBQ, Stars and Love
    Interesting story concept, interesting 'story' by Grandpa, maybe a slight stretc ...
  •                                The First Edition
    Was waiting to read my first 'from the insects point of view' BBQ story. liked t ...
  • THE TRUTH
    General: first of all, I like the concept and it is well written.  Plot: under d ...
  • Alone
    This is a very powerful subject, done in a very powerful way. Congratulations, i ...
  • A Battle
    Very nice change of pace from the typical melodramatic. thank you, I can get bac ...