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  • Somerset Levels.
      And you brought all that stuff together. Good backstory, and a satisfying expe ...
  • Zeus' Day
    Yes, that is what I was trying to say. Your wording creates this cute, adorable ...
  • Sex Appeal
    Congrats, Ms. M on a great story selected for the top five. Loved the story and ...
  • Tentacles
       First of all; Good writing. An exploration, a treatise on motherhood with 6? ...
  • Divine Intervention?
      Congrats, Fiona, on last months win. Go ahead, celebrate tonight, the bubbly i ...
  • AlecS' Sub Lie
    Please see my comment in the general thread, sir.
  • Writer's Block
      I think what Duncan and Alec are looking at is a disparity of the main charact ...
  • Destiny's Plaything
      Well sir, this is a fine tale. By and large, I mostly wondered about the time ...
  • The Firm In Seven Days
      Hey Allen, well, that was a bit of a challenge to get through, but I am glad I ...
  • A Day of All Days to Cherish
      A very gentle trip down (or up) memory lane, but I think I am missing somethin ...
  • Gift
      Interesting, the obvious question as we read, evolves into the whole point. No ...
  • Hex Nihilo
    Great giving it a second go, Duncan. Good luck? That's not right. Break a?  Thi ...
  • Floaters (Revised)
    No finish on Forgiveness, yet. Sorry, I feel almost guilty now. About half done, ...
  • Praying hands
    Hey Neil, sorry, it was not my intention to make light of the story. It is bril ...
  • Juniper - Edited(Final Draft}
    Hey Dude, waitin' for the May sub. Also, have some fun with Duncan, Alec and I. ...
  • The Man in the Monitor
      Tony, this is by far the funniest thing of yours I've read. After 'he may take ...
  • The Relaxation Session
       You have made me realize that writing subs every month is like adding windows ...
  • Meeting Dylan Thomas
      Hate to disagree, but he is actually addressing a particular person. You don't ...
  • Follow Cat
       After reading this, and a couple of the other subs that are similar, not in t ...
  • Disclosure
    Hey Jo, you have painted a very complete portrait. It's an easy read as we prog ...
  • My message from the future.
      Hey Bing, okay, here goes. The story feels weak in the believability departmen ...
  • Snowbound
      Sweet, except Liability doesn't fix the vehicle. I stand by my comment. No Ins ...
  • Camelling
      Wow, again.    Great piece Mariaski, maybe your best... but I think I said tha ...
  • The Last American Gunslingers
    Hey Chris, gotta run, so I will finish on this later, however, this line >Steven ...
  • Unto the Breach...
    Hey Finn, great story. Loved it. Couple places where the phrasing seemed a tad o ...
  • Finit en Avance
      Thanks.      Okay, great story. Not just entertained... it was poignant. Not e ...
  • The Price of Freedom
    Hey Sue, I did not have a problem with the word tresses. I just do not know why ...
  • Granada
      Not a vignette. IMHO, not even close. Sorry. The action literally takes place ...
  • Father Christmas.
      I would love to read your story sir, but I can not hack through the 1600. Mayb ...
  • The Curse Weaver
       I also took umbrage and my faux pas is now slick as a whistle.     The 'Golde ...
  • The Curse Weaver
    So, what are you springing on us now? Oh, I get it................ Spring. :)  L ...
  • Spring’s Golden Rules
       I don't know what El Canadian is right about, in this instance, but let's get ...
  • Spring’s Golden Rules
      Okay, read it again and now I am confused. As Duncan pointed out, she can't ha ...
  • Spring’s Golden Rules
       Don't understand all the confusion.    She reads the rules. Goes on a date. D ...
  • Spring’s Golden Rules
    Also this: When she talked about sex, she said that thanks to gravitational forc ...
  • Delilah
      Have to agree with Alec. Too much stuff. Look at it from the reader's point of ...
  • She
    Hi Sue, missed you.  Not just sayin'. Nice story.    Took it from your explanato ...
  • Unyielding
       Hey bro.............    I breezed through the first para... because I was afr ...
  • I Think ... Therefore.. I'm Still Thinking
      Hey Tony, I don't know if the consistency of a piece like this can hinge on th ...
  • A Journal of Blank Pages
       Wow Neil. First, let me say this is a very complete and compelling story. The ...
  • Chance Encounter (Revised)
       Hey Sue, how did you choose this tense? [NOT A CRITIQUE!]  Just want to know ...
  • Chance Encounter (Revised)
       Extremely interesting from the point of a simple present / present progressiv ...
  • Ice Water Palace
    I can't help feeling this is autobiographical :) Hang on LV, someone will discov ...
  • Comet the End
    Sound does transmit it space. It is just not called sound. Sound is a convenient ...
  • Brady be damned
    Why would anyone assume the criteria of the sub was to make people guess what th ...
  • Challenge Carol's Song - Revised I-07-2016
       Happy New Year Mariaski, read your sub and it is soooo interesting. A little ...
  • Holiday
      No.5, is just one of those perfectly written, low keyed funny lines. It is not ...
  • The Gate
    Very atmospheric and a very complete tale.   A few things kept tugging at me. >I ...
  • For the Man Who Has Everything
      What is the difference between > "I don't really need money."  and  "I really ...
  • Wardrobe Shaped Boxes
    C'mon, if you have a part of your colon removed, it's semi colon, right? Sorry, ...
  • I don't think we're in Zork anymore
    That's it! My first experience on a Commodore 64. I never got past those Oracle- ...
  • In the Flames of the Night
    Hey Finn, this was awesome Finn'ese.  Great Finn 'block and tackle' :) Liked fol ...
  • x
    Mariaski, this was beautiful for me.  As far away as you are, this made me feel ...
  • Wardrobe Shaped Boxes
    Hey Susie Q. Anyone call you Susie? When I was in grade school (long before your ...
  • Party On
    I think LP and I are somewhat on the same page, however, this is the way I see i ...
  • Her final day
    Really great story, very well written.   Wasn't too happy with the ending, but.. ...
  • I don't think we're in Zork anymore
    The more I remember... it was more like this.  Open door   The door is locked Us ...
  • Snowflake
    Good story Anthony, start to finish. Much better control on word choices.    Con ...
  • Such Pain
    Also, if 'Such pain', in the beginning - refers only to emotional trauma, then y ...
  • Guys
      I seriously do not understand why you don't have thirty great comments already ...
  • The Chest
    LV, need your help. If time permits, can you choose which of my stories (3 now) ...
  • x
    Mariaski, at the risk of encouraging you, I am working my way through this, in t ...
  • The Chest
    So, is this about women's equality? Is one daughter in exchange for a few sons f ...
  • Creepy Crawlies
    Sue, just doin a remake, here.  I think the story is great. I love the over-the- ...
  • The Silver Arrow
    Really like the pace here. We move along, so I am not getting bored, which I am ...
  • Creepy Crawlies
    If there was a way to cut 150 words... I would chop.  Thing is... we all get set ...
  • x
      You drag me along, whether I want to or not. Very poetic, very much the same a ...
  • Corina
    Why did Lionel say he was groped from start to finish?
  • Corina
    My first, revised for my lady. Commas abound,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, If not, try on ...
  • Her Last Night in Paris
    First, let me say I really like this. Very different. After that, there are issu ...
  • Can't Love You Anymore
    Very strange, I just wrote a sub based on that Dollys' line and described the pr ...
  • Space Robot Five
    Duncan, this is awesome. In my very humble opinion one of your best, and that i ...
  • Confession of a Teenaged Grog-Slinger
    You can write 'curmudgeonly', but you can't say it! Weekend 46% gone for you. Ju ...
  • A Yarn of Confessions - Revised Aug 20
    Allrighty then. Did not see the twist coming. Would of been super great for last ...
  • Temper Fugit (Hex Nihilo Part 2)
    Just wanted you to know, I started from the beginning again a couple days ago an ...
  • On Safari
    Hey Keberly, this one seems to have a similar formula as the racoon but this one ...
  • Wings
    Very nice story.  I was a little confused at the last paragraph. Not sure if the ...
  • Consequences
    Congratulations RaeAnne, liked this one a lot. Now I know why. Ta Da!  chris
  • Keeping Up With the Joneses
    Well. The comments are only confusing me. I prefer to read the story and let it ...
  • Death's Daughter
    So, I started reading this and have one question. When you are writing, is there ...
  • A heart stopping Valentines Day
    I am not sure what your intent was with the story. Did you write this for the ch ...
  • A heart stopping Valentines Day
    Sorry, I did want to welcome you to Webook. I have found this website to be an a ...
  • The World (an autistic view)
    I kind of feel like the poem is stronger in structure and direction in the first ...
  • White Knight
    Last minute word on being over the top. If writers did not at some time write so ...
  • The Cold Can Burn Like Fire
    Sorry, still not buyin' it. I do love you though, you know that! I have to deal ...
  • The Cold Can Burn Like Fire
    Yeah, I know, it's me again. Reread it again. It's coming back to me. You had he ...
  • The Cold Can Burn Like Fire
    Just read this again. Would it be okay to get in a couple thoughts? Firstly, I a ...
  • Straight Out of Hell
    Hey K. I worship these guys, so let me gush for a second.   The Coen Brothers: F ...
  • Straight Out of Hell
    I think Duncan is on to something. She hides, he comes in, then everything goes ...
  • Over the Trope
      Awesome! Thanks for a good time. Best line: You stopped cooperating, so I'm na ...
  • I Imagine My World
    I would like to lather you with praise, but I'm not sure what you would end up s ...
  • Rough Justice
    Hey E., the more I think about it, their reaction to the news story is what is m ...
  • Rough Justice
    I read this before coffee this morning, I should of waited until I'd had a cup. ...
  • A Listless Carol
    Now we're cooking :) One small thing. "we win". I think maybe you have an opport ...
  • Portrait of a Lady
    Well, let's deal with all the stars first, shall we. I shall place two on the ma ...
  • Summit
    Read the story again. Now I like it a lot. Had trouble gettin into it before may ...
  • Summit
    added another 2k to mine. I don't know how people know when you have made an add ...
  • The Pact
    Having read this several times: The deed i.e. killing the boy (it was an acciden ...
  • The Pact
    Very interesting to use the literary device of having the narrator involving the ...
  • While angels weep
    I have to add - it's quite the work. I have read this a number of times now. It' ...
  • The Color of Light
    For what it's worth: Very good start. At this point I beg the question: How far ...
  • Mermaid Wishes
    Wondering if 'fair' equates to 'stinging slap'. Perhaps something other part of ...
  • How Much is that iPhone in the Window?
    Are you still up Dex?  And this is why I have anxiety.  I buy I replace I displa ...
  • While angels weep
    Really 'cheery' Duncan. Your still in winter up there, aren't you. I remember th ...
  • Give a Dog a Bone
    Hey Ronnie, okay, made it to the critique. Here is what I think. I like the init ...
  • To Have and to Hold
    Melodrama throws me a bit. It's so close to real life and yet- it's not. Maybe i ...
  • Coming Home to Roost
    Nicely written. So, Paul couldn't just move to San Francisco, do drugs and make ...
  • Victim of Circumstance
    Hey Earnest. Are you going to resubmit a different story? I know we are all slam ...
  • Bad News
    Hi Jacob. This is a very catchy story with a solid start.The repetition of 'or s ...
  • Time is Silent
    After rereading this I now get it. Her cheque bounced, didn't it. Expanding on ...
  • Time is Silent
    the latter. :)
  • Master Perkin's Slave Plantation
    Hey Anthony, this is certainly an interesting piece. The one thing that pulls me ...
  • Hex Nihilo
    5 stars as usual Duncan. You put so much work into everything you write. Complex ...
  • Songbird
    At first I thought you were doing a parallel story using Alfred Stieglitz and Ed ...
  • Freedom
    Kind of saw something was up / coming down the pipe. Not sure what the tip-off w ...
  • Enough to get by
    Well, I really like what you are trying to accomplish. It is a little hard to fo ...
  • x
    Some thoughts -If the 1st para is supposed to convey the importance of the case, ...
  • Freedom's Call
    Very well written. It moved through without a hitch. I did not see the ending co ...
  • Ultimate Freedom (revised 7/29/14)
    Hey Tony, I really like the concept here. Like the poems. Thought maybe the Dale ...
  • A Friend Like No Other
      I have decided to try to contribute a little in comments now, as I am trying t ...
  • Suburbia's Vice
    Really, great first paragraph. Seriously, but then maybe the second should be ju ...
  • Still
    How can you not like this piece? Wow, well thought out and well written. You lea ...
  • A Passing (Revised)
    Very poignant. One of those reads where the precise thoughts of the author make ...
  • Trapped (Rev 6 - 15 days left)
    I have not done this before but thought I would simply (maybe this once) make so ...
  • Doppler Feelings Log, January 12, 2013(Revised 6/23/14)
    Really like the story idea! I actually like the way it jumps around quickly from ...
  • No Exit
    DJ, if we always had to worry about being too PC, or 'over the line', when writi ...
  • Thanatology (revised 05/26/14)
    I have read this three times. I have a question. What would the story have looke ...
  • Yet Another Door
    I had to read the other feedbacks first and I seem to be in the same camp as Ale ...
  • Needlework
    very sad. This story makes me think when I really should be knitting.