grafiksad's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 10/31/2017

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Submission Reviews

  • Where Monsters Dwell
      Hey Josafat, this was a very lively first person sub. I like that you avoided ...
  • Someone shoot Tennyson
       Things come slowly to me, because I am a self-learner. Now that I have about ...
  • Anticipation
      I will attempt to exert some effort to look past all the delicious description ...
  • Table for 3.14159
      At the risk of offering where no help was asked. I liked the 'Home James'  but ...
  • Posh Nosh
      As long as we are tid-bitting, the use of Geronimo gave me pause in combinatio ...
  • The Spider and The Fly
       The best, m'lady, the best.    Very clever au' snappin'.        No, seriously ...
  • Just a tad
      Firstly, I am not sure this meets the challenge. None of the story hinges on a ...
  • It started with a kiss
      Hey Fiona. I remember a few years ago, when I first started writing on this we ...
  • Bite
      Good story, Lou. Maximum entertainment value. I like you really going for it l ...
  • Good Evening
      One of the things I focused on with this sub is the bold text voice and how to ...
  • Trigger
    Absently >  absentmindedly? his pupils and he resembled > no 'and' maybe?     Ha ...
  • Holiday Justice
      Hey Lou, just wanted one final say on your sub. The run-down sequence at the e ...
  • Last present.
       I found this an interesting read in a specific way. It, to me, comes off as a ...
  • Diana
      Stupid is as stupid does would often describe my critiques. Somebody stop me.. ...
  • The Shelf
       Beautifully written, Sue. The easy pace continued to invite me along. Having ...
  • The Wrong House
      Liked it a lot.   You maintained the scene with good dialogue and descriptions ...
  • Chapter Eight
      Hey Sheri, reading this gave me very much the same feeling as when I'm invited ...
  • The Medicine Room
    Okay, awesome story. I don't usually go through a sub, but here are some thought ...
  • Mom's Loan To Lenny
       Hey Chris, had a lot of thoughts on this one. Reads a lot like a character st ...
  • Penury
       Perhaps it was a mistake to read Alec's comments first.    At any rate, a bea ...
  • Hagionomicon
    Short and sweet
  • Writer's Redress
       Hey Rick, that is a lot of dialogue. To be honest, it feels somewhat dated. T ...
  • Uprising
      Great fun, James. No one appreciates the creative humor more than me. It must ...
  • Pebble (Try Number Two)
      Really liked this story. The one about the author's frustration and the four l ...
  • Chapter 2: Missing Child
       Louisa, hi, just went through the first two chapters.    Big things first. As ...
  • Solstice
    please note the Twilight Zone mini contest we are running in the general comment ...
  • Four Years and a Day
    NJ: Please note the Twilight Zone mini contest we are running in the general com ...
  • Day Seven
    Hey Richard. Read this twice and thought about it. I am kind of drifting around ...
  • Where goest the soul?
    Hey Duncan, a compelling story. I think the very first paragraph put me off a b ...
  • The Peephole
      Hey Trish, great story. Really enjoyed it coming together, the realization tha ...
  • The Peephole
      Okay, read your commentary below about wanting to surprise the reader. That ca ...
  • A Cautionary Tale
    Hey, it's me. rereading this and find it to be the perfect example of having a r ...
  • In Case of Emergency
    Always enjoy your writing Dave. I especially liked your April poem which I react ...
  • More Than A Pretty Face
    Did you already submit this to George Lucas? You did, didn't you. Loved the ride ...
  • M I N E
    Good handle on some descriptive narration.  Some innocent suggestions based on ...
  • Give a Dog a Bone
    Allrighty!  Amazing re-organization. The stuff that was missing pops up later. Y ...
  • Spin
    Hey NJ, first a caveat, I am not a professor of Lit. I think a good comparison o ...
  • Spin
    Hey NJ. I have gone through this a couple times (reading this). I feel like the ...
  • Tarot
    This makes me wonder if getting older is slowing me down. There is a LOT happeni ...
  • Alohomora
    Poems can take many forms, maybe that's why there are poems. Literature's catch- ...
  • The Heart of Time
    This is very 'epic' and very well written. How did you cram a novel into 1000 wo ...
  • I will forever regret
    This would be an awesome preface for the remainder of the story. I would simply ...
  • I will forever regret
    Okay, I have now written the story of what happened to Jake (he's now Jake), thr ...
  • Slave to Temptation
    Gonna throw this in the ring. There is an awful lot of question posing here. I w ...
  • Pride & Envy
    So we are exactly the same page Duncan. Remember, Anthony's piece does not have ...
  • Pride & Envy
    Very emotional speech. It made me think in depth about what seems to be the MC's ...
  • Marcus Speaks
    Hey Sue, your writing is (as my dad used to say) "smooth as a baby's butt'. His ...
  • Training
    Going out a limb again, but I can't help myself. I perceive a hole in the logic ...
  • All By Myself
    Hey Dex, great sub! Just to contribute, a couple things. "Christmas bonus" may b ...
  • The mind's eye
    First of all, I really liked the description / concept of the mind map materiali ...
  • The Fork
    This story definitely had me from the get-go. Very well paced and staged. The te ...
  • Always Smile Back
    General: I had to read this one four times. At first I fell pray to the simplici ...