jblane's Compliments

Compliments:  18

Last Compliment: 10/30/2017

Unique (3)

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  • Anterograde
    Well, that's embarrassing. Anterograde, not antegrade. Again, assuming my discla ...
  • Time Traveling Muffins
    I like the rambling yet informative format you've used here. As has been mention ...
  • Of Threats and Thieves
    I like the title and I think the buildup of the MC's predicament is well done. I ...
In-depth (2)

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  • The Abyss
    I really like the setup. A normal man in a normal place with an oddity. It doesn ...
  • Body of water
    This is dark. And good. And dark. And not in a bad way. But there's always room ...
Brilliant (2)

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Helpful (5)

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Enlightening (4)

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  • Big Fish
    There's a lot that I liked about this. It's got a lot of voice and humor in it. ...
  • Teacher (Revised)
    Devious! I like it.  One point of potential confusion/clarification: Why "is it ...
  • Revenge
    I bet you could work the first scene of the story (where they're in the workshop ...
Motivating (2)

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  • Utopia - revised
    The first paragraph is a great background set up, but it seems like something yo ...
  • Monty's New Job
    The second and third paragraphs were gorgeous.  However I felt that the last two ...