kentchapman's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 12/16/2013

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  • X-mas Eve
    Over all , I enjoyed this very much. It certainly is an original piece of work. ...
  • Chapter 1- Awakening
    Its sad to think, (even harder to imagine) the sufferings of the wretched in tho ...
  • The Shaman of Smoke Cove: In Search of Asgard
    I really enjoyed this one. Very thought provoking. With a hint of lust. Well do ...
  • Fantastic offer! Two girls for the price of one!
    I'm afraid I have to agree with PhillipNorhill. However,  I'm sure you meant no ...
  • Double foot Super Cleaner.
    This is an unsolicited testimonial for the "Double foot Super Cleaner".   A few ...
  • The dragon of Kernow and the Hells stone
    This was a very interesting story. I liked the use of the of Gaelic terms.  Jus ...
  • Yours Syrup-stitious
    This work seems (I could be wrong)  to speak of some type of abuse.  None the l ...
  • Unforgivable Sins
    There are quite a few errors in your story. In the fouth line,  "I'm sorry, aft ...
  • RETURN TO SUNRISE END
    I enjoyed reading this. There is only one line I'd ask you about: In your seco ...
  • Puppy Love
    As it seems with all young hearts, unprepared for the reality of  ones first "l ...
  • A Passionate Lover
    oops! (their addictions)
  • Tragedy
    Very well written piece. I could almost feel the waves hitting  the breakwaters ...
  • Sick Note
    One of the most ludicrous, distorted, and  inappropriate  idioms ever spoken by ...
  • So Everything Is Normal, Right?
    There are a few things that I would, perhaps change.  The first is in the secon ...
  • Fate
    Even though you may not have put "much thought" into this , as you say, still, t ...
  • Prompt 4 (Ghost)
    I love it! And I really felt that you might be the ghost. Now that was a cool st ...
  • I'm Done
    I have felt the same pain as you have so aptly written about. Well done!
  • 2. Chapter One
    Going along well. There are a few things I would point out. 1. I may have read ...
  • You Are Just Like Them!
    I love it so far! Theres just one line that you need to look at. Its in the 3rd ...
  • You're Lying
    Wow! You are an excellent writer. You are able to hold the readers interest, or ...
  • Home at Last
    A very heart felt story. The only word I found found that (I think is two syllab ...
  • Jared Martin
    Only one I saw was : "brainstorming sessions were the group would decide"   S ...
  • A New Smell
    Just a thought on a couple of lines. " He was right, they could be, but so coul ...
  • the open road
    Great job PENquin, by the way love the name! Very original. And thats the truth ...
  • How Long?
    Asking the question is most of the answer.  I know it's been cliche'd to death ...
  • Nowhere in Hell.
    Please don't be embarrassed!As I've told some other friends,thats what proof rea ...