nightingale_046's Compliments

Compliments:  7

Last Compliment: 9/7/2011

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Submission Reviews

  • the barbecue
    It's catchy because of the rhyming and easy to read and short. Work on your spel ...
  • The Castle
    cut out "whispered" and "then" and make the second more clearer with what you're ...
  • Chills
    there's a storm tonight as well. i think it has passed. no lighting. this is rea ...
  • FUN fun FUN Survey:) Boys Version
    can you do a girl version?
  • Chapter 1 (teaser thingy)
    take the words in small letters away, they ruin the effect, mood, and world that ...
  • Chapter 2
    the first paragraph is deeply confusing but i can feel him in a rush and i can p ...
  • Chapter 1
    the first sentence is really shocking, i don't think anyone has started a story ...