roninshinobi's Compliments

Compliments:  5

Last Compliment: 2/23/2011

Motivating (5)

Submission Reviews

  • Chapter 2
    Second chapter fast paced as well,and still holds the readers attention,so far s ...
  • Marauders in The Evening
    A very mature write this one, good descriptions and it is a change from vamps an ...
  • Chapter 1
    An excellant start, plenty of mystery and menace to make the reader want to know ...
  • Chapter 1 - Hints of Rebellion
    For a start of a first chapter this is ok but i think you need to add more info ...
  • 3. The Feast
    for such a graphic scene this was well done not over the top. Just the right amo ...