sigmundsquirrel's Compliments

Compliments:  24

Last Compliment: 9/17/2013

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Submission Reviews

  • Lily
    This was poignant and powerful. And very nicely written. For me, the power comes ...
  • An inexplicable stench
    You've created two very real, very solid people without telling much about them ...
  • Set For Life
    I had to struggle through some of the writing to read this. I can tell it's a gr ...
  • Their Dreamboat
    Exceptionally vivid description of the boat, which makes the sad toll Time extra ...
  • I
    The Job story is quite profound, perhaps the earliest horror story in recorded l ...
  • The Plague Doctor
    I had a second read. This is still an evocative piece, but I think it has lost s ...
  • A Neat Idea
    This is great! Well-written and perfectly understated, realistic and believable. ...
  • This Is Me
    This isn't really my genre—the succubus/vamp monster who randomly or arbitrarily ...
  • The Titillating Tube
    I just read the longer [original?] version and your MIND THE GAP footnote. While ...
  • The Titillating Tube
    This abbreviated style works well with the cultural brand names, which are thems ...
  • Frozen in Time
    This is a seamlessly silent interaction. The silence contributes to the melancho ...
  • Sweet Louisa
    A piece on this subject could easily become hysterical or exploitative. You've a ...
  • Kitchen Door
    I like the single paragraph: one continuous train of thoughts and descriptions t ...
  • Kenneth Clarke
    It's hard to make this format interesting. It seems perversely designed to take ...
  • Emily Dickenson Was Agoraphobic
    You've given "inside" two meanings. Sorry, but that makes this 7 words.   ;-p
  • Silenced - Chapter Five
    You're building suspense nicely, despite the lack of overt action.  The characte ...
  • Silenced - Chapter Three
    The idea of vampires in small-town Texas introduces an intriguing opportunity fo ...
  • The Buzz
    Enjoyable read, although there is something absurd about it too. (I like absurd. ...
  • The Hungry Hungry Carnivore
    The most unresolved part of this is Greg's relationship to the sirens approachin ...
  • (short story) Emptiness Drive
    This is the second time I've read this. I can't remember exactly how you had it ...
  • I am coming for you
    A summary is such a short way to reveal a story, it forces you to make decisions ...
  • Shrive
    I've gone over a few of the endings posted so far and it definitely brings out t ...
  • The House on Magnolia
    The story you are setting up is about the slow transformation of character, an e ...
  • Lycan Times
    Very nice!   I think you have a few too many unnecessary details that distract f ...