sigmundsquirrel's Compliments

Compliments:  11

Last Compliment: 9/9/2013

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Submission Reviews

  • The Fix
    The blue ones suck. Red's the bomb. The MC should have kept a red in reserve and ...
  • Fall's First
    jblane is back, jblane is back!  *er, excuse me*  Very evocative and well-crafte ...
  • Millenial Kiss
    Ahhh. A history buff's fantasy! Surprisingly tender and wry at the same time. Ve ...
  • The Chamber
    Carlos Castenada meets August Derleth.   Or something.   Nice.
  • III
    I think this is the best chapter so far. The dialogue is spot on and natural (wh ...
  • First the Rabbits...
    You've surpassed the challenge—you created and destroyed a world, and laid the s ...
  • The Marathon
    This was nicely described, making the physical run vivid for me. But I didn't un ...
  • Texan River Dance
    On first reading, I constructed a false storyline about a sidewalk grifter who d ...
  • Crave
    It's perfect now.
  • Dead Wrong
    The lines about the rose-colored glasses and seeing the best in those you love s ...
  • Ending for Life in the Time of Troubles
    A strong paragraph and nice imagery of the combusting paper. I like ending with ...