thebrat's Compliments

Compliments:  46

Last Compliment: 1/4/2018

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Submission Reviews

  • Twelve Soldiers Singing
    Adorable Hobbit, I Loved this piece. A bit different for you, but nonetheless ve ...
  • The Name of Fear
    Adorable Hobbit, your writing is as wonderful as ever. THIS IS EXCELLENT!  devi
  • MetaWriting
    Richard,  If you start a project for us all to post notes on writing, and send u ...
  • MetaWriting
    Richard,  I have volumes of notes and research on writing.   However, as much as ...
  • The Price of Freedom
    Sue,  How wonderful!  I've been reading you from when you were first begun until ...
  • Granada
    Admittedly, my reading this was a quick read. I might have to revisit, but I lar ...
  • She
    Sue,  I'm so pleased at how wonderful a writer you've become.  Recently, I picke ...
  • The Love of a Mother
    This inverted sense of 'molding' a child's personality to ensure the child's sur ...
  • Recess Lessons
    There is some truly excellent writing here, and that may in fact be a problem re ...
  • Confronting the Empath
    Lanette,  I had no problem discerning villain and victim. Surely each is a littl ...
  • Victim of Circumstance
    As I recall, your very first challenge submission was a sea story also. I rather ...
  • Time is Silent
    Adorable Hobbit,   This is an exceptional submission. Among your best efforts. ...
  • Heat
    This is a HUGE subject to be explored.  Yes, there are people for whom sex is a ...
  • The Right Kind of Whispers
    Very nice!  I do not have the soul of a poet, but appreciate those who do.  devi
  • The Colour of Happiness
    This was beautifully done.   Lots of emotion here. There's little to fault.  exc ...
  • CASA
    I agree entirely with Ernest. This is undoubtedly your best work to date.   You ...
  • Hungry
    hmmm, I kind of assumed this was Stewie and Brian from Family guy.  Nice and eng ...
  • To Light, Ignite... And Bring To Life
    Wow, so how weird am I? I thought it was a leather-bound classic book, something ...
  • My Affliction
    OMG!  I have this affliction!  I'm also paranoid. Have you been spying on me?? ...
  • How The Dead Left Eden
    This is as GOOD as it ever gets.   If I were to have picked this up at random fr ...
  • Last Words.
    Nice!  Very visual and emotionally engaging.  I'll leave it to others to observe ...
  • The Nothing Blonde
    You SO piss me off!!!  Will you write this story ALREADY  and stop fucking aroun ...
  • Zombies in the Mist: Memoirs of a Zombie Nymphomaniac
    I remember reading this a long time ago. I liked it then and like it now.  So, w ...
  • An Ancient Evil
    This made me smile as well as wonder. Do Hobbit's observe All Hallow's Eve?  Goo ...
  • The Assembly Hall
    I very much liked that you described the smell of the room.  Most writers forget ...
  • The Best Days
    Exceptional, as always. You paint so vividly with so few words. I now have to ch ...
  • First Kiss
    I suppose a first kiss doesn't have to be a first kiss, but a first kiss with so ...
  • First Kiss
    You have a dark soul. :)  Me too, but dentures?
  • Love Changes Everything
    Lovely!  There's little more to say.
  • The Gypsy's Touch
    Hey, girl, U could write an entire love story based upon this. :)
  • Tea for Two?
    Dollys, you are remarkably consistent in flying just under the radar with your s ...
  • Mourning Bath
    Adorable Hobbit, what have you got wandering about inside your pretty head?  I r ...
  • Go Big or Go home
    Interesting? I never thought that looking at your watch was distinctively Americ ...
  • From the Bottom Up
    What I found engaging was your ability to paint.  Your descriptive use of langua ...
  • Big Fish
    I recall reading about a murder committed by a mother poisoning her kids with et ...
  • Forever Mine
    OK, I gotta say I'm impressed.  My expectation is that somewhere within your sto ...
  • Shelby
    Lanette, U know I adore U, but really, ya gotta stop putting these biographical ...
  • The Mexican Standoff
    This was classic Finn.  A fistful of something fursure!
  • Trail of Pilfered Purses
    Bob, this was delightful fun and engaging.   I really liked the manipulation he ...
  • Leprechaun Libation
    Adorable Hobbit,  Surely this is a true story. I've no doubt that wherever in th ...
  • Disapperance
    I can tell you that you are extraordinary and that you have my admiration.   I w ...
  • upanishads
    Life is honey.   I understand.  d
  • Just Business
              You just know when stuff goes wring that its the fault of some IT guy. ...
  • Give Feedback
              Someone asked me what genre I was writing. I answered, "literery." ...
  • Resurrection
    Of all the shire dwellers I love you the best. No, really, I do  I missed you. ...
  • The Death of Mary Mjöll
    Way cool!  So why are we still talking about this. Give the Squirrel his prize ...