tonydonell's Compliments

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Last Compliment: 10/31/2017

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  • Mental Klinikiphobia
    Officer Hammer offered  -- think it needs to be something stonger than offered ...
  • Diana
    only very slightly - think you could lose the very Loved the little slice of dom ...
  • The Vinaigrette Vignette
    "It slid between my digits like Aphrodite herself had urinated there upon. " Nic ...
  • Nightfall
    Now - even more perfect and succinct -- what I like about poetry and song for th ...
  • Garden of Eden
    I believe balderdash can't be used as an adjective. The line "Her mind growing h ...
  • The "Incident"
    Stephen King's "Firestarter" had elemement of this (movie and book - early 80's) ...
  • The Oldest Kid on the Block
    As one who was also an "older student" - I understand all your emotions --   My ...
  • Ode to Doug
    my additions in parenthesis)  On them your hair has curls and waves.  But the la ...
  • Ode to Doug
    remeber -- there's a reason it's called "poetic license"  -- so just beacuse you ...
  • DELETED
    One clarification -- didn't mean rhyme -- it just has a rhythm - not like iambic ...
  • DELETED
    Free verse isn't always so free   -  But I didn't listen to you my first twenty ...
  • Yours Syrup-stitious
    Shah -- I didn't mean to imply that you needn't change anything.  Other than a f ...
  • Chapter 1
    Interesting choice of song to run by.  Bolero  -- not sure it would give you a g ...
  • You and I
    Love the universal theme of the poem. We're all in this together and we all come ...
  • Voices: Chapter One (section five)
    "she always found it difficult to refute any inference that revealed that what m ...
  • Chapter 2
    Need a comma after self pity  Their Mortal Minder - like it - but maybe put in q ...
  • THIS HAS BEEN DELETED
    I like that you used "muddy shoes"   So manic deppressive song?  Typo suites ...
  • Can't Love You Anymore
    Ivy thanks for the help -It's redundant cause it's a song - don't have a microph ...
  • Chapter 1
    need a comma after around in first sentence,  "I hadn’t got anything for anyone" ...
  • Toy's In The Attic
    "Reflecting on my past the Cedar has to be at least fifty-five years old. I reme ...
  • White Chief
    Lizzard amountain sisters.Some andrealized untill flatened take instead of taken ...
  • The Little Hippopotomus
    Interesting - are you using the hippo as a symbol for birth, which is is used fo ...
  • There's a spider!
    General: as always - humorous -     Form: Meter's a little off - you have there ...
  • Frost
    General: Like the modification of last line - so now I like all of it  Form: May ...
  • 5. Show and Tell
    Wonderful children's teaching story - Teacher come out big too.  Couple things - ...
  • New Life
    More song than poem. Never personally liked the adage that "there is nothing new ...
  • "BROKEN"
    Wasn't  suggesting that you change anything the word "fucking" doesn't bother me ...
  • Wheelchair Blues
    Blues are about experiences - usually about lost or bad love - Loss of freedom i ...
  • LUCKY FOR YOU
    The best thing about getting older is the shorter memory for things you don't wa ...
  • Woman song & Booze
    I think it would be helpful to upload some of the actual music of the great lyri ...
  • The "Ode"
    Just a little clarification about Gestalt Theory (see penbuddy's comment below)- ...
  • Dad...I Need Your Hand
    as a long time dad - it touches me - that being said - I agree  somewhat with Wa ...
  • That's A Fact                      ( unfinished )
    this one has a garage band element - I especially like the first 2 lines - sets ...
  • It 's My Heart
    I wouldn't change anything except the typo - you use "their" - think you mean "T ...
  • 2. Chapter Two - Shelf to Rack
    I love "Then again, that was Levi’s finest quality – his strength."  Think you ...
  • 1. Chapter One - Cycle to Shelf
    Brilliant!! 2 things - I would take out "quite literally" in the first sentence ...
  • Home To Stay
    Very heart felt - tough to give you some suggestions - since I can't conjour up ...
  • In A Bad Way    ( Duet ) Unfinished
    Like it all except - I'd change these 3 lines to something  like  Just talk a ...
  • the best things in life are free
    Like the rhyme and meter   But don't agree that Rock and roller bring you down
  • In A Bad Way    ( Duet ) Unfinished
    White Stripes like.  And it really sounds like you got love in a good way  I ...
  • When The Rain - Shines Down On Me Baby
    I'd like to hear it - it has a Bob Dylan quality about it - one question  in the ...
  • DAMN KIDS...!
    Liked it all except first verse - what I mean is that I like the first verse - b ...
  • Get On Down The Road
    Lot's of people feeling the same way now - Feels like a little Doobie Brothers' ...
  • Roses Aren't Always Red
    Way better than Bobby Vinton's Roses are red. one comment in the second verse y ...
  • 3. The Walnut Escapade
    I've read the first 3  chapters - not sure where you're taking your characters - ...