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Last Compliment: 10/25/2017

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  • Sophia's Saviour
    I need to come back later and try again -- I have a tendancy like Alec to read t ...
  • Body of water
    Not sure why there's a difference of spacing between lines but.. other than odd ...
  • The Spoon Prince
    Liked the changes - think you have a nice skeleton of a fairy tale (or moraity t ...
  • The Spoon Prince
    So - I am not going to repeat what many have said except - that it does feel lik ...
  • Posh Nosh
    I’ll use my x-ray eyes to read it shall I?”  - not sure you need "shall I"  Beds ...
  • Group Therapy
    Chris - all I thought was that the bakery girl was baked - just not sure how
  • Seder
    Interesting Duncan - so I enjoyed the flow of the story - it's like how I felt a ...
  • Cosmium
    So Duncan this is an interesting piece - aside from my personal belief that god ...
  • Rotten Possum
    While I liked the humor - I guess I missed the connection - So why 2 possums? I ...
  • Bite
    The first sentence isn't a sentence.    Bimbo seems out of place   Not sure what ...
  • Outside the Box
    Sorry I am late getting to this   "The sand spanning the perimeter of the bay wa ...
  • Diana
    Looks good Jo  - well done
  • Decay
    An unfamiliar metal railing in the way blocks the movement. Confusion.  He stan ...
  • Floaters (Revised)
    Nice -- know all about floaters - like where you took it - Of course being the s ...
  • Montana Weather
    I'm with Sue -(AlinaVoyce)- I liked the the gentle tale -- Reading some of the o ...
  • My Colorful Life
    I think it will make  a great story eventually -- I stand with you when you said ...
  • I Lived
    I agree with AlecS - has potential -- I would not have him turn into a wsss at t ...
  • Corina
    It is the atmosphere that sells this one -you feel the need to bath yourself in ...
  • Hex Nihilo
    Well that was etertaining - nicely constructed story - don't mind first person d ...
  • Gimme Shelter
    nicely set up and done -- loved the line " His hands shook from frustrated adren ...
  • Boots of Spanish Leather
    I know you used a youtube of a newer group -- but I'm old enough to remember whe ...
  • The Brother and Sister
    wonderful lines-- "The girl hesitated, and the King felt the cruel cut of doubt, ...
  • Jessie's Smile
    Just beautiful story telling -- a memorable heroine - a good yarn -   the only t ...
  • 31 May, 1962, Ramla, Israel
    A strong statement and sentiments -- it's interesting that Eichman stated this r ...
  • The price of freedom is being free
    Think it is Wiccan Rede.   Interesting take on freedom -- almost "Freedom's just ...
  • Pleasurable Pain (Revision 1)
    nice -- appeals to my well purient interest.  I do have a problem with the use o ...
  • A Friend Like No Other
    Jakes a lucky man -- I have only one nit --and maybe I am wrong so if I am - I h ...
  • Libido Ergo Sum
    I don't need to tell you that you write well - I do have a problem -- it's the s ...
  • Entrance to the Song
    Just beautiful - but be careful of word count -- yes WB knows count is off - but ...
  • Fool In FoodLove
    I'm with Dolly on this -- needs to be cleaned upped. -- Did the really say "Happ ...
  • Marital Shame
    I like Lorraine -- she seems more "handy" than Walt though..  Just a couple of n ...
  • The Long Winter
    can't go wrong with an English Grammer Knock-Knock joke --   Only one suggestion ...
  • Mortified
    My only comment would be to make it definite -- Say you were 10 years old in 5th ...
  • Word Warrior on a Deadline (Revised)
    welcome -- couple of typos I see
  • Word Warrior on a Deadline (Revised)
    Honing my craft is certifiably daft, my mind keeps saying I’m wrong. I’d try a t ...
  • Balderdash
    I like the idea but it could use some work -- for example -- he uses balderdash ...
  • Revel
    I think wonder is right in how it's used -- "lack of light" feels awkward  annoy ...
  • The River
    Wonderful - I too like the freshness -- like the puns "deadend job" -- wonderful ...
  • Dark of night
    Don't want to be a pain --nonetheless is an adverb - so you have an adjective de ...
  • A Fifth Grade Class Photo
    I enjoyed the read -- there are some grammar problems,  e.g. plead should be ple ...
  • First Admission of Pain
    Think you need to rework " It was no great passionate thing, and over too quickl ...
  • First Admission of Pain
    Interesting -- they love each other but they're are not friends, they're enemies ...
  • Demure
    Nicely told -- in this age of tatoos (a waitress once told me they were tribal, ...
  • First Kiss
    The change in POV does seem to hurt the story -- like the twist on old fairy tal ...
  • First Kiss
    awesome idea and great ending. There are some english tense problems -- e.g. " G ...
  • Sacrifice
    always like a good twist.  would have liked a more complexed way to get her name ...
  • Ode to Doug
    I like all the way up to out grown -- there's a feet and movement (rush) theme. ...
  • Profile
    Just-me -- your profile name -- I got it -- well done
  • Delicious Danger
    Just a couple of things about this love poem  Need an apostrophe between l and s ...
  • Precious
    Like the whole poem - except the word truly -- think it has more impact  with ju ...
  • Bonehead
    I will be more constant with my reviews starting next week  - at least that's my ...
  • Blessed Art Thou
    where fore - is just one word I think? My open hand with bring the Spring. (do y ...
  • Divided Choice
    Moonstone (I hope Moonstone because you enjoy Cat Stevens) Even though this is s ...
  • Mum, there's an alien in my bath!
    Like the idea especially the ending - in this case the uneven meter slows the po ...
  • what's that?
    Yes ... Need to flesh this out - love the ending
  • 17. Chapter 17
    "hoity toity " - my wife was the first one I ever heard use that phrase.  "Ala ...
  • 10. Chapter 10
    No her father dismissed her after she agreed to marry cerule.  Glad you let her ...
  • 4. Chapter 4
    In chapter 4 Orion is agitated - here he is in fish heat- what changed?  What di ...
  • Prologue
    Images are beautiful - I enjoy stories where writers take the time to describe t ...
  • 1. Prologue
    Way to get everyone's attention. Good start young lady. Check your spelling - I ...
  • Call Home
      This refrain would fit nicely in a song The devil’s got your number, but it’s ...
  • "BROKEN"
    For me it's the rhythm and rhyme of your poetry that helps explain the anger - I ...
  • My Way or the Hi-way
    Thanks again
  • Sleazy Woman
    Thanks
  • I Wanna Grow Up!
    Jimmy Buffet wrote I'm growing older but not up My metabolic rate is pleasantl ...
  • Out of the Ordinary
    Like the rhyme & rhythm except for "it’s faster don’t you know" - it's more pass ...
  • The Chamber of Love
    Nice - I would have preferred an ending where she said something like "Are you?. ...
  • Underneath It All
    A beautifully almost poetically written piece of work. I loved the line ""It tak ...
  • Part One
    take out "readily", "veritable", "sultry". The dining room table was always set, ...
  • JUST AROUND THE CORNER FROM HELL
    Fantastic - Makes me wish I wrote it - at least it describes me  Only 1 small ...
  • Mexican Time
    Thanks Emy - I have corrected the typos
  • Pray a-weigh
    Emy - thanks I agree - got "preachy" on my last 2 lines - so eliminated  Tony
  • Stole My Heart Away
    "you get a whole lot more, than just an honorable mention"  Faint praise indee ...
  • A Relevent Fairy Tale - 3rd
    I will wait to tell this one to my granddaughter - but I find it hilarious
  • Don't Be Scared
    Liked it - would like it better if you took out some of the "it"s "is"s and "so" ...