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Posted: 9/15/2017 5:32 PM PDT
I think this is a good and interesting topic. In my opinion, it might be slightly tricky to build on to, but I'm sure you'll find a way!
Posted: 9/5/2017 3:58 PM PDT
In Chicago, a child sells himself to work for a highly dangerous, powerful mob criminal to pay off someone's debt. Now grown into a young man, a part of a dangerous gang, spending most of his life with criminals he has trouble figuring out which person he is until a girl walks into his life, turning it around which he finds out that to be with her he has to protect her from what he does for a living. Keeping his two lives apart he has to make a choice eventually.
Its a Love, Drama, Action story, this is just a brief summary. What do you guys think??? Please leave a feedback