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Posted: 1/23/2016 9:21 AM PST
I would like feedback on TIME PIRATES - my novel. if you have time. Im reviewing yours right now
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Posted: 1/23/2016 9:20 AM PST
I will give feedback For feedback
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Posted: 1/22/2016 8:49 PM PST

I'm looking for feedback on Chapter One of my novel, Trial of Injustice. In return, I'll give feedback for your project as well.

Here is the book blurb.

Banker, Alabama will never be the same again.... 
On a Thursday morning in Banker, Alabama the body of a twenty-one year old was discovered murdered. After the police and forensics inspected, with the help of eye witnesses and fingerprints, the man responsible for the heinous was identified as Pastor Thaddeus Ganvis. 
Charles "Esquire" Everson, a man gifted with determination and an avenger of truth, became the most prestigious and sought after lawyer in the state of California, due to his unwavering litigation skills. After finishing another victorious case, he returned to his office. As the day swindled away, he found himself logging into Facebook, and nearly dropped his phone when he discovered that his former pastor was arrested for first degree murder.  Without a second thought, he booked a flight to Banker, Alabama to prove the innocence of Pastor Ganvis. Along the way, he discovers the opposition that threatens and the hidden secrets of the townsmen.

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