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Posted: 11/2/2015 6:49 PM PST
Thanks both of you feed back was just great, really it helped my writing significantly :) I hope both of you are enjoying my story so far :)
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Posted: 11/2/2015 4:14 AM PST
Hi - just left feedback.  Hope some of it's useful.
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Posted: 10/25/2015 2:58 AM PST
Hey, I just gave some feedback on your first chapter. I would greatly appreciate it if you went and read the first scene of my screenplay called "Dream Invaders" and gave some feedback on that too. It was a good start to a story, but I feel like you rushed it way too much.
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Posted: 10/25/2015 12:04 AM PDT
I would love some feed back on a story I'm writing. Its a Fantasy Sword and Magic type of story. I would gladly give you some feedback as well. :)
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