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Posted: 1/16/2014 1:46 AM PST
Sorry, for more specifics, it is a fantasy fiction novel, originally intended for older teen readers.
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Posted: 1/16/2014 1:45 AM PST
Please take a look at my book. It's only chapter one I've uploaded for now, but I'd like some feedback on the style and flow. Also comments on suspense and interest. I'll try to return the favour.
http://www.webook.com/project/Seen-Through-My-Eyes
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