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Posted: 8/16/2015 4:26 PM PDT
On it, Chief. I've got a prologue and 5 chapters done on mine. I ask only that you read and critique the prologue, after that if you enjoy my story and wish to continue critiquing, feel free. If you don't enjoy the prologue, lemme know why and you're free to do whatever you want.
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Posted: 8/1/2015 10:45 AM PDT
Hey man, I'll give you feedback if you do the same with my short story Payphone. I'll get on reading yours as soon as I can.
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Posted: 7/29/2015 5:08 AM PDT
Working on a thriller about a serial killer. I've only posted the prologue and the first chapter, but I'd love some feedback. I'll return the favor.
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