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Posted: 2/8/2014 9:19 AM PST
Hey, I hope my feedback is helpful. If you get a chance to read through a chapter or two of one of my stories, I'd appreciate it.

Shriving Fire: http://www.webook.com/project/Shriving-Fire

Viper's Luck: http://www.webook.com/project/Vipers-Luck-1

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Posted: 2/7/2014 5:52 PM PST
Yikes! Sorry for the spam, my Internet isn't working properly at the moment. That wasn't intentional, I promise.
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Posted: 2/7/2014 3:11 PM PST
Just got done reading and reviewing your work. Hope you find it useful!

My story: http://www.webook.com/project/The-Archist-4
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Posted: 2/7/2014 3:09 PM PST
Just got done reading and reviewing your work. Hope you find it useful!

My story: http://www.webook.com/project/The-Archist-4
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Posted: 2/7/2014 3:07 PM PST
Just got done reading and reviewing your work. Hope you find it useful!

My story: http://www.webook.com/project/The-Archist-4
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Posted: 1/16/2014 8:19 AM PST
If you guys can leave comments on any chapter but chapter 1 (this includes chapter 1 continued) that would be great. Thanks 
http://www.webook.com/project/Silver-Lining-2

Happy Reading and Writing


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Posted: 1/13/2014 11:19 AM PST
I reviewed your first chapter and would love it if you could do the same:

http://www.webook.com/project/Somewhere-2
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Posted: 1/3/2014 10:29 AM PST

Hey! I'll be glad to give you some feedback. I hope to get your feedback in return. Thank you!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Past-is-Present

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Posted: 12/3/2013 5:09 AM PST
So I'm currently working on this Teen/Young Adult Story called Silver Lining. It would be totally awesome if anyone can check it out. Ill definitely return the favor. Thank you :)
http://www.webook.com/project/Silver-Lining-2

Happy Reading and Writing
 
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