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Posted: 8/17/2015 7:45 AM PDT
Yessir
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Posted: 8/17/2015 2:19 AM PDT
have you given me feedback?
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Posted: 8/16/2015 3:43 PM PDT
Ask and ye shall receive. 
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Posted: 8/15/2015 7:03 PM PDT
All done, for a first chapter i couldn't find many flaws, it was well written and flowed well.
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Posted: 8/12/2015 2:22 PM PDT
Just did it. You did a very good job, but the grammar had some problems, but not so bad as if I hated it. I was actually hooked, even. Could I ask if you could give me some feedback on mine?
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Posted: 8/2/2015 4:54 AM PDT
Im a new writer and have written four chapters of a fantasy novel. I would love some feedback on the first chapter.
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