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Posted: 3/11/2016 9:20 PM PST
Hi everyone, 

I have never written a book before but have always had many ideas. I decided to give it a go and have made a start but I really am after some feedback before continuing on, because if its horrible I dont see any point. Honest feedback much appreciated. 
basically my book is a fiction about a girl who has two different coloured eyes, society has now changed and people are ranked based on their perfections, meaning anyone with any scars or flaws are considered and labelled "defects" which due to her different coloured eyes my main character is labelled. I have not got up to the main things but there will be a romance with a guy who is considered one of the "perfect" ones.
Here is the link to my book.

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