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Posted: 4/14/2011 12:07 PM PDT
Have you thought about why the girl makes the other one cry?
Honestly, without seeing the story (at least a smidgen before this scene), I can't offer much help.
Posted: 2/2/2011 4:49 PM PST
So I'm in the middle of my story and I can't find any good ideas and my friends aren't any help.so my characters at a party with a friend she hasn't talk to for years and thats pretty much it so farthe characters are at summer camp and there all around the age of 13/14 I want this part of the story to end with the girl running out crying her crush try's to help and everybody being mad at the girl who made her cry can anybody help me please