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Posted: 2/11/2014 12:13 PM PST
I saw some of your feedback and thought it was really good. I can't get to my PC tonight but tomorrow night I'll try to return the favour.  Thanks so much for your help.  

My my baby had his immunisation jabs today so if he wears me out tomorrow I promise I haven't forgotten and will read your stories ASAP.I'm sure he'll be fine x 
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Posted: 2/11/2014 9:04 AM PST
I seem to have left a lot of critique for you. Take it with a grain of sand. Also if you get a chance to read through a chapter of one of my stories, I would appreciate any feedback you have.
Thanks.

Shriving Fire: http://www.webook.com/project/Shriving-Fire

Viper's Luck: http://www.webook.com/project/Vipers-Luck-1


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Posted: 1/30/2014 2:08 PM PST
Please check out my novel Wipeout:  http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=84eff8f638964ccf827cb852a8b22a81&st=7e7ff961e1fb4f49b4d6a2f2...

Lily can't remember the past few months but Jace is now her boyfriend.  Kiara wishes she couldn't remember the past few months as she tries to get over the heart ache of being dumped by Jace.  Kiara starts to rebel in life and her sneaking around causes her to uncover a dangerous world.  Will Lily remember who she is in time to save Kiara.

I've split the chapters into smaller bite size parts.  If possible please try to read a whole chapter but any feedback is better than none.  I shall then try to return the favour.
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