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Posted: 3/8/2011 1:21 PM PST
So I wrote down a pretty good sized scene the other night that doesn't have a place in my plot yet. I was wondering if anyone would like to read it and tell me if I captured it well enough to make readers feel the somewhat intense emotion that my character is going through. If so, please let me know, I'll bake and send you virtual cookies =)
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