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You give me your opening two pages - or two pages from anywhere - and I'll read them and suggest areas for improvement, give feedback, etc. Then you do the same for me, and we can even make it a regular thing if you want, assuming this gets any traction. I think page to fame works because even if you hate what you're reading you can focus long enough to finish it without skimming through.
Who knows, you might even get motivated to write regularly.
What I will actually read: Mystery, suspense, thriller, action/adventure, sci-fi.
What I won't read: Romance, fantasy.
Drop a link to your work and I'll respond within 24 hours.