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Posted: 12/12/2013 4:27 PM PST
I have a short story entitled The Feminist Theory of Lennox M. Wright's Whorehouse ( I would deeply appreciate any feedback and would also be delighted to provide feedback for another work of similar length. In total (on Microsoft Word) the document is 15 pages double-spaced with normal margins, and approximately 5,000 words.

I have taken two college writing courses thus far and have a pretty solid knowledge of providing feedback. I will critique your story based on all of the WeBook criteria (General, Character, Plot, Structure, and Tone/Voice). It may take up to two weeks as I am currently in the process of college finals (eep!).

Lindsey Lewis (lindseyleprosy)

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