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Posted: 9/16/2015 5:43 PM PDT
Much appreciated.
Posted a review. Your story has potential, but is in need of revision. 
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Posted: 9/16/2015 1:56 AM PDT
Hey, I really enjoyed your chapter it was excellently written, I'd love for you to return the favor.
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Posted: 9/11/2015 10:17 AM PDT
I've posted the first chapter of my high fantasy/western novel and I'm wondering if it's any good. 

I'll review anything of comparable length in return (3000ish words), but I prefer fantasy and science fiction. The more detail and critique in the review, the better. 

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