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Could you do a review on my short story, called Ash. I know its horrible, but I really need some writing advice to get me going.
It's a quick story to read and it's crap, but any help would be great!
I give good feedback ;p
Mine is a romance fantasy, dealing with Angels and demons. I know. But it is NOT lame or overdone, promise haha
It's called, He's The Devil, Presumably ;p