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Posted: 6/4/2017 10:01 PM PDT
It was 10 p.m. everything was quiet
and still in the basement. You could hear the misty winds in the thick thin air
being blown against the window. The basement was abandoned almost as if it was
empty with no toys, no dolls, no nothing. You could even hear a pin drop on the
floor that was how the room was quiet enough. The only noise you could hear was
a soft scream. Getting louder and louder! It was like a human screaming to his
death. While you are entering the basement, all you could hear was the pin.
Then the screams would get louder and louder. And all you could do was run for your lives.
What do you all think of this short short story??