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Posted: 9/25/2013 12:07 PM PDT
Ok that makes sense. Thank you :-)
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Posted: 9/25/2013 12:01 PM PDT
Elmore Leonard suggest ...”Never use a verb other than "said" to carry dialogue and Never use an adverb to modify the verb "said”… Allow the words to exude the emotions of your character so the adverbs would be redundant. As for “said”, it quickly and quietly disappears for the reader's view …
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Posted: 9/25/2013 1:33 AM PDT
I am wanting my character to think out loud and hold conversations with others but dont just want he said she said I want emotion but dont know how
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