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Posted: 5/24/2014 12:37 PM PDT
Note: I have changed the title of the project to "Instincts".
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Posted: 5/24/2014 6:23 AM PDT

I am looking for honest critique on my first project ever "Laws of Attraction". So far I've only uploaded a short introduction chapter which I intend to update and lenghten but I really need help with ideas and grammar. Grammar especially since English is my second language.
And, in return, I will read anything you want me review and give you some honest critique myself. Sounds fair, doesn't it?

Reply this when you've reviewed and commented my "work", tell me what you want me to read and give feedback on and you'll have it shortly! :)

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