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Posted: 9/24/2015 8:49 PM PDT
Hi Krystle, Yes I'd love to check out your book! I'll take a look at a few chapters tonight. :) I'm going to post some other works on here but I do have a few other stories I've already posted that I'd love for you to check out.
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Posted: 9/22/2015 4:29 PM PDT
Hi. My name is Krystle and I'm new to the writing world and recently self-published my first book, a children's fantasy. I would be happy to give you feedback if you wouldn't mind taking a look at my book and giving me feedback in return. It is about 140 pages, but the font is 18. I know that's probably still longer than your one chapter so I would be happy to give you feedback on anything else you are working on.

I just need an unbiased opinion from a non family member or friends.

Thanks.
Krystle
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Posted: 9/22/2015 4:29 PM PDT
Hi. My name is Krystle and I'm new to the writing world and recently self-published my first book, a children's fantasy. I would be happy to give you feedback if you wouldn't mind taking a look at my book and giving me feedback in return. It is about 140 pages, but the font is 18. I know that's probably still longer than your one chapter so I would be happy to give you feedback on anything else you are working on.

I just need an unbiased opinion from a non family member or friends.

Thanks.
Krystle
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Posted: 9/21/2015 11:45 PM PDT
I'd love to get some feedback on the first chapter of my new romance fantasy novel. It's called "My Guardian." I think the title is self explanatory and yet I still want it to have a bit of mystery. Any commentary is appreciated!
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