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Posted: 9/6/2011 2:52 PM PDT
Totally! My first draft is a little sketchy but if you could be the first to read it, I'd be greatly honored. http://www.webook.com/project/Becoming-Me-1
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Posted: 9/6/2011 11:06 AM PDT
Hi This is my fantasy/adventure. I'd love some feedback. http://www.webook.com/project/The-Ravens-Wing Thank you very much.
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Posted: 9/6/2011 11:00 AM PDT
Hi This is my fantasy/adventure. I'd love some feedback. http://www.webook.com/project/The-Ravens-Wing Thank you very much.
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Posted: 9/6/2011 6:59 AM PDT
http://www.webook.com/project/Just-my-luck-1 I have 6 chapters so far! It's romance. I'd be happy to give one of your stories feedback if you want it of course, just let me know which story you want me to give you feedback for!
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Posted: 8/30/2011 9:05 AM PDT
teen adventure novel! http://www.webook.com/project/Trusting-You
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Posted: 8/29/2011 9:18 PM PDT
check my stuff out por favor http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-of-the-Earth
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Posted: 8/22/2011 2:58 AM PDT
here's mine http://www.webook.com/project/Magic-5
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Posted: 8/20/2011 9:45 PM PDT
I have the first page and a half up from my up and coming novel. Its called CRYO and is a science fiction psychological thriller kind of deal, for a full description visit the page: http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=d0e9442e561445e9916cafcafb20e2bf&st=d57d43eca65e4e00aa537295a1a36061 Thanks, and i hope some1 reads the prologue, im kind of new :)
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Posted: 8/17/2011 7:42 PM PDT
It's Happening.
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Posted: 8/17/2011 9:31 AM PDT
FANTASY!!! Please Please Please Please read?!?!?! THANK YOUUU!! http://www.webook.com/project/The-Hunter-6 Ohh and I will read whatever you write tooo :)
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Posted: 8/11/2011 11:06 PM PDT
Try something here: http://www.webook.com/project/SHORT-STORY-WRITERS
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Posted: 8/11/2011 7:42 PM PDT

JohnRobert
Would you like to read my works? They're probably a little "lighter" reading than you meant, but they're good. I've won contests with them. http://www.webook.com/project/The-Poets-Consortium
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Posted: 8/11/2011 7:21 PM PDT
hey man check out a short excerpt from mine :)! http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-of-the-Earth
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Posted: 8/8/2011 9:05 PM PDT
Hi. I'm looking for people willing to read some micro-fiction. Right now I only have one sample of it....but more will be available with time. This is very, very, very short, so it won't consume too much time. Here: http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=7cc1fbbb782f4380b1ba893255a55f7d&st=cc1f5b8a787943588f873c5af5d273d0
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Posted: 8/8/2011 4:30 PM PDT
on my profile there are three im working on the newlands is the one i think you would like best though im getting quite proud of it but i need some views! it would be very much appreciated!
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Posted: 8/7/2011 4:04 PM PDT
would love to get your feedback. My ebook is already on Amazon and Apple BUT I'd like to have feedback from someone I don't know:) This is Sci-Fi, Fantasy, action and adventure - all in one book. let me know what you think and if you'd like me to send you the rest. http://www.webook.com/project/Lost-In-Time-Mirage
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Posted: 7/29/2011 10:39 AM PDT
Thanks kindly for your offer. My story is a comedy/fantasy which I hope will give one or two folk a few laughs. Any constructive feedback of course gratefully received. http://www.webook.com/projects.aspx?pn=BinToEarth
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Posted: 7/27/2011 11:32 PM PDT
http://www.webook.com/project/Windex-and-Wands Feels strange doing this, but here's my story to look at.
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Posted: 7/27/2011 3:08 PM PDT
I wrote a short story about God. It's called 'God'. If you like reading things, you should read this; I assure you that it is indeed a thing. http://www.webook.com/project/God-6
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Posted: 7/27/2011 1:22 AM PDT
http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=980441aff3e143518dedda7390c56fb1&st=9a02f95ff7324332be4cdfab974e98c8 Mine is a sci-fi fantasy all about the manipulation of time. Thank you. Jack.
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Posted: 7/25/2011 2:58 PM PDT
I'm interested in an outside view on my story. in this first chapter I have action and fantasy. It would be nice to get some constructive criticism. http://www.webook.com/project/Unity Thank you for your consideration.
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Posted: 7/25/2011 3:33 AM PDT
Mines sci-fi(ish), fantasy and little mystery. http://www.webook.com/project/Two-Worlds-Souls-Heartbeat Thanks :)
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Posted: 7/24/2011 6:31 PM PDT
When I said early-one... I meant early-on. I wish there was an edit option for our posts.
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Posted: 7/22/2011 4:35 PM PDT
I hope you choose to read mine. :P I've planned it all out, I just have to write it. So any early-one story quirks you can point out will be helpful. :] http://www.webook.com/project/Vampire-A-Tale-Told-by-Spiders
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Posted: 7/20/2011 9:56 PM PDT
Well, here's the link to my story. It would count as Sci-Fi, Action, Mystery, and probably Horror. http://www.webook.com/project/AthenVerse-1
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Posted: 7/20/2011 6:38 PM PDT

Kiseki
Mine's a fantasy, with some action/adventure. :] http://www.webook.com/project/Savior-Like-Distant-Suns Thank you! :] Resa
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Posted: 7/20/2011 1:44 PM PDT
Here's a link to my poetry, but any story on my profile also loves feedback! http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=1fbc531af3dc43649a28df9e317dafa4&st=1307cabcfe594852bf3cc0ae694f8d29 Thanks
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Posted: 7/19/2011 1:19 PM PDT
Here is my story. A sci/fantasy romance. http://www.webook.com/project/The-Witch-of-Eden Sergei, a New York times bestselling author, is accused of rape. Before his life can end, a young woman named Lily offeres him salvation from his fate in prison.But his slavation comes with a price. One that will cost him his insanity. Hope you enjoy
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Posted: 7/19/2011 11:36 AM PDT
http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=ac4b01bb41454870a9a8479b651ca6ac&st=fdecd61dfb4f48ac838f1a45ecb7cfda Have a look at mine? Its a sci fi romance. :)
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Posted: 7/19/2011 11:28 AM PDT
No return feedback is required.
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Posted: 7/19/2011 11:26 AM PDT
I'm looking for something good to read. If I choose to read your story, I promise that I will give you decent amount of feedback and constructive criticism, and not just the mere one line response. I enjoy reading sci-fiction, fantasy, action, and adventure.
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