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Posted: 7/19/2011 11:26 AM PDT

maladjusted

I'm looking for something good to read. If I choose to read your story, I promise that I will give you decent amount of feedback and constructive criticism, and not just the mere one line response. I enjoy reading sci-fiction, fantasy, action, and adventure.

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Posted: 7/19/2011 11:28 AM PDT

maladjusted

No return feedback is required.

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Posted: 7/19/2011 11:36 AM PDT

Irishwolf

http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=ac4b01bb41454870a9a8479b651ca6ac&st=fdecd61dfb4f48ac838f1a45ecb7cfda

Have a look at mine? Its a sci fi romance. :)

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Posted: 7/19/2011 1:19 PM PDT

doctorbrooks34

Here is my story. A sci/fantasy romance. http://www.webook.com/project/The-Witch-of-Eden

Sergei, a New York times bestselling author, is accused of rape. Before his life can end, a young woman named Lily offeres him salvation from his fate in prison.But his slavation comes with a price. One that will cost him his insanity.

Hope you enjoy

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Posted: 7/20/2011 1:44 PM PDT

SlowCheetah

Here's a link to my poetry, but any story on my profile also loves feedback!
http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=1fbc531af3dc43649a28df9e317dafa4&st=1307cabcfe594852bf3cc0ae694f8d29
Thanks

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Posted: 7/20/2011 6:38 PM PDT

Kiseki

Posts: 58

Mine's a fantasy, with some action/adventure. :]

http://www.webook.com/project/Savior-Like-Distant-Suns

Thank you! :]

Resa

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Posted: 7/20/2011 9:56 PM PDT

Sundown_Native

Well, here's the link to my story. It would count as Sci-Fi, Action, Mystery, and probably Horror.

http://www.webook.com/project/AthenVerse-1

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Posted: 7/22/2011 4:35 PM PDT

Green_Regol

I hope you choose to read mine. :P
I've planned it all out, I just have to write it. So any early-one story quirks you can point out will be helpful. :]

http://www.webook.com/project/Vampire-A-Tale-Told-by-Spiders

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Posted: 7/24/2011 6:31 PM PDT

Green_Regol

When I said early-one... I meant early-on.
I wish there was an edit option for our posts.

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Posted: 7/25/2011 3:33 AM PDT

Brookie

Mines sci-fi(ish), fantasy and little mystery.

http://www.webook.com/project/Two-Worlds-Souls-Heartbeat

Thanks :)

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Posted: 7/25/2011 2:58 PM PDT

Shivian52

I'm interested in an outside view on my story. in this first chapter I have action and fantasy. It would be nice to get some constructive criticism.
http://www.webook.com/project/Unity
Thank you for your consideration.

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Posted: 7/27/2011 1:22 AM PDT

JELLIOTT111

http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=980441aff3e143518dedda7390c56fb1&st=9a02f95ff7324332be4cdfab974e98c8
Mine is a sci-fi fantasy all about the manipulation of time.
Thank you.
Jack.

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Posted: 7/27/2011 3:08 PM PDT

Elias

I wrote a short story about God. It's called 'God'.

If you like reading things, you should read this; I assure you that it is indeed a thing.

http://www.webook.com/project/God-6

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Posted: 7/27/2011 11:32 PM PDT

Secret_Rue

http://www.webook.com/project/Windex-and-Wands
Feels strange doing this, but here's my story to look at.

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Posted: 7/29/2011 10:39 AM PDT

BinToEarth

Thanks kindly for your offer.

My story is a comedy/fantasy which I hope will give one or two folk a few laughs. Any constructive feedback of course gratefully received.

http://www.webook.com/projects.aspx?pn=BinToEarth

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Posted: 8/7/2011 4:04 PM PDT

tomguy

would love to get your feedback. My ebook is already on Amazon and Apple BUT I'd like to have feedback from someone I don't know:) This is Sci-Fi, Fantasy, action and adventure - all in one book. let me know what you think and if you'd like me to send you the rest.

http://www.webook.com/project/Lost-In-Time-Mirage

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Posted: 8/8/2011 4:30 PM PDT

DaisyGirl

on my profile there are three im working on the newlands is the one i think you would like best though im getting quite proud of it but i need some views! it would be very much appreciated!

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Posted: 8/8/2011 9:05 PM PDT

Kaizar

Hi. I'm looking for people willing to read some micro-fiction. Right now I only have one sample of it....but more will be available with time. This is very, very, very short, so it won't consume too much time.

Here:

http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=7cc1fbbb782f4380b1ba893255a55f7d&st=cc1f5b8a787943588f873c5af5d273d0

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Posted: 8/11/2011 7:21 PM PDT

EddietheWalrus

hey man check out a short excerpt from mine :)!

http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-of-the-Earth

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Posted: 8/11/2011 7:42 PM PDT

JohnRobert

Posts: 20

Would you like to read my works? They're probably a little "lighter" reading than you meant, but they're good. I've won contests with them.

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Poets-Consortium

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Posted: 8/11/2011 11:06 PM PDT

Pandoress

Try something here:

http://www.webook.com/project/SHORT-STORY-WRITERS

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Posted: 8/17/2011 9:31 AM PDT

csbasiliere

FANTASY!!! Please Please Please Please read?!?!?! THANK YOUUU!!

http://www.webook.com/project/The-Hunter-6

Ohh and I will read whatever you write tooo :)

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Posted: 8/17/2011 7:42 PM PDT

Tragat

It's Happening.

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Posted: 8/20/2011 9:45 PM PDT

NoahJames

I have the first page and a half up from my up and coming novel. Its called CRYO and is a science fiction psychological thriller kind of deal, for a full description visit the page:

http://www.webook.com/submission.aspx?p=d0e9442e561445e9916cafcafb20e2bf&st=d57d43eca65e4e00aa537295a1a36061

Thanks, and i hope some1 reads the prologue, im kind of new :)

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Posted: 8/22/2011 2:58 AM PDT

Pent

here's mine
http://www.webook.com/project/Magic-5

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Posted: 8/29/2011 9:18 PM PDT

EddietheWalrus

check my stuff out por favor

http://www.webook.com/project/Blood-of-the-Earth

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Posted: 8/30/2011 9:05 AM PDT

jennabelle

teen adventure novel!
http://www.webook.com/project/Trusting-You

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Posted: 9/6/2011 6:59 AM PDT

nicoletonyx

http://www.webook.com/project/Just-my-luck-1 I have 6 chapters so far! It's romance. I'd be happy to give one of your stories feedback if you want it of course, just let me know which story you want me to give you feedback for!

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Posted: 9/6/2011 11:00 AM PDT

BlackPenny

Hi This is my fantasy/adventure. I'd love some feedback.
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Ravens-Wing
Thank you very much.

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Posted: 9/6/2011 11:06 AM PDT

BlackPenny

Hi This is my fantasy/adventure. I'd love some feedback.
http://www.webook.com/project/The-Ravens-Wing
Thank you very much.

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Posted: 9/6/2011 2:52 PM PDT

monicakyler

Totally! My first draft is a little sketchy but if you could be the first to read it, I'd be greatly honored.

http://www.webook.com/project/Becoming-Me-1

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