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Posted: 10/3/2011 5:59 PM PDT
Okay, so this is like the third version of a novel I'm starting to write and it could use a look at it, if you're interested.
Here's a brief summary of it:
A broken prophecy threatening a nation, the dream world is shattered, and a leader is in danger. Can the races of Erothian unite to stop this, or will the unfulfilled prophecy destroy the world?
and the URL if you are interested, I could really use the help in seeing what needs help. The prologue and chapters 1 through 3 are currently up. Thank you in advance.
As always, I will return the favor! :)
p.s. might take me a bit longer to get to your story and return the favor. Just busy and can't get to it right away. :)